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Defeating Death?

by Ricky1024


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"Defeating Death?" (A)
Written on May 20th, 2023
By Doctor Ricky 1024
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April 1st, 2003.
(April Fools Day)
Gifting your Life away.
Away to those less fortunate.
Fortunate and unfortunately.
Unfortunately there comes.
Comes a Special time.
Time to give.
..
Give with all your Heart.
For my Broken Heart.
You see?
See how much it can mean?
Mean?
Mean to you?
..
You need to realize that God.
God does Love you!
You are Special!
Special indeed.
Indeed your need has been satisfied.
...
Satisfied with your New Heart.
Heart and Lungs you see?
See the New Life now.
Now from your Kidneys?
Kidneys filter like Livers do.
...
Do you now realize?
Realize that you are defeating?
" Defeating *Death?"

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"Defeated Death" (B)
(A Conversation in Heaven)
Written on May 21st, 2023
By Jason Richard Smrkovsky

Okay God, Eye did as You instructed me too.
Yes, to get in that "Death Car"
Yes, with my ok friend Brian.
And, I ain't a lieng.
...
Yes, My son but did you feel a thing?
Yes God, but Eye still cant see ir hear a thing?
Yes, God and I can't even hear the Angels sing?
I can see but not clearly ornearly like I used to.
...
Well My son, I can see.
I can't undo certain things til time goes by.
Please son don't you cry.
Soon.
Real soon.
You'll see.
...
May 31st, 2023.
And, over Twenty years hath passed...
...
God?
Are you listening to my prayers?
I've been doing this now for 7,355 daya!
...
It's okay Jay..
And, on this very day.
I will take your existence in your Bodily form away.
But above?
All I can say?








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*Death: noun
/deTH/
1. the action or fact of dying or being killed, the end of the life of a person or organism.
"an increase in death from skin cancer"
Similar: demise, dying, end, passing.
*the state of being dead.
"even in death she was beautiful"
*the permanent ending of vital processes in a cell or tissue.
...
Note: A parents worse Nightmare is the loss of a child.
But buy a Miracle, Life can be renewed!

Note: To learn more about the Miracle of'Organ-Tissue Donations?'
Simply contact my dearest friend.
Lara S. Moretti the L.S.W. with
"The Gift of Life!"
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania at
1-800-DONORS-1.
...
Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Only Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review, this Talented Artist and Amazing Writer, 'Dt.Ricky 1024'
And, his Incredible Picture Entitled,
"Alexander the Great Choo-Choo Commander"
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