General Fiction posted May 6, 2023


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A life shattered gradually repaired

Shattered

by BermyBye50


 

Jake was once a happy-go-lucky guy who loved life and everything it had to offer. He had a loving wife, Jane, and two beautiful children, and a job that paid well. But that was all in the past now. Today, Jake is a shattered soul, lost in a world of despair.

It all started when Jake lost his job. At first, he thought it was just a temporary setback, but weeks turned into months, and he couldn't find work. Bills piled up, and the stress of providing for his family weighed heavily on his shoulders. Jake started to feel the overwhelming weight of the world upon him and he began to withdraw from his family and friends.

One day, Jane asked him what was wrong, but he couldn't find the words to explain. He felt like a failure, and he didn't want to burden her with his problems. So he kept everything bottled up inside, and the stress continued to eat away at him.

Jane had just come home from work and noticed that Jake had already started drinking.

"Jake, we need to talk," Jane said, her voice trembling with emotion.

"What is it?" Jake replied, taking another sip from his beer bottle.

"You can't keep doing this to yourself. Your drinking is out of control, and it's tearing our family apart. You're neglecting your responsibilities, and our kids are suffering because of it."

"I know, I know," Jake replied, his voice slurred. "I'll quit tomorrow."

"You always say that Jake, but tomorrow never comes. If you don't get help, you're going to lose everything. Our family, your job, your health, everything."

Jake knew that Jane was right, but he didn't know how to stop drinking.

"I need help," Jake said, his voice barely above a whisper.

"I know," Jane replied, her tone softening. "And I'm here to support you. But you need to take the first step and have to be willing to ask for help."

Jake replied, tears streaming down his face. "I'm sorry for everything."

"It's okay, Jake. We'll get through this together."

Jake nodded, feeling a glimmer of hope.

But just when things seemed like they were starting to get better, tragedy struck. Their daughter Janelle was diagnosed with cancer. The stress of it all was unbearable, and Jake started drinking heavily to cope with the mental and emotional pain. He would come home from the hospital and drink until he passed out. His wife tried to talk to him about it, but he didn't want to listen. He felt like the world was against him, and he didn't care anymore.

 

A few months later, Jane came home and found him passed out on the couch with an empty bottle of whiskey beside him. She knew she couldn't keep living like this. She had had enough and packed up her things and left with the kids, leaving Jake alone in the house. He tried calling Jane, but she wouldn't answer. He had lost everything that mattered to him because of his actions. His life was shattered, beyond all hope of repair.

He started drinking even more heavily, spending every day in a drunken haze. His life had become an endless cycle of anxiety and despair, and he didn't see a way out. His drinking intensified until he found himself homeless begging for dollars on the street corner. He began to feel increasingly isolated and hopeless spending his days wandering the streets, searching for a place to sleep and enough money to buy alcohol. His health began to deteriorate, and he became increasingly vulnerable to violence and exploitation.

The next day, Jake woke up in a hospital bed. He had no memory of how he got there, but he knew he was in bad shape. The doctor told him he had liver damage from years of heavy drinking and that he needed to stop if he wanted to live. Despite his desperate circumstances, Jake was hesitant to seek help. He felt ashamed of his situation and feared judgment from others.

One afternoon, while recovering in the hospital, Jake struck up a conversation with a volunteer from a local homeless outreach organization. The volunteer listened patiently to Jake's story and offered him information about the resources available to him. After his release from the hospital, Jake mustered the courage to visit a local shelter, where he received a warm meal and a safe place to sleep for the night. The shelter also offered counseling and job training services, which Jake decided to take advantage of.

For the first time in a long time, Jake felt like he had something to live for. He checked himself into a rehab center and started to work on getting his life back together. It was a long and difficult process, but Jake was determined to make it work. He started going to AA meetings and talking to other people who had been through similar struggles. He wanted to find a way to put the pieces of his shattered life back together.

He stopped drinking, started taking better care of himself, and found stable housing and employment. He reconnected with his family, and although it took time to rebuild trust and repair relationships, he was grateful to have their support.

 

One afternoon, he was walking home from a AA meeting when he saw a shattered vase on the ground. The pieces were scattered everywhere, and it seemed like there was no way to put them back together again. So he decided to gather the pieces and took them home.

Shortly after he arrived home he started to pick up the pieces, fitting them together like a puzzle. As he worked on the vase, he thought about his own life and the mistakes he had made. He felt like he was the shattered vase, broken into pieces that seemed impossible to put back together. It wasn't easy, and it took a long time, to reassemble the vase, but he persevered.

Through his hard work and determination, he was able to repair the vase. It was a little rough around the edges, and there were still some cracks, but it was whole again. And as he held it in his hands, he realized that his own life was like that vase. It had been shattered into a million pieces, but with time and effort, he could put it back together again. He knew that the road ahead wouldn't be easy. There would be setbacks, and times when he would feel like giving up. But he also knew that he had to keep putting the pieces back together until his life was whole again.

And as he walked to his next AA meeting holding the vase carefully in his hands, he felt a sense of hope that he hadn't felt in a long time. He knew that there was still a long way to go, but he was determined to keep moving forward, one piece at a time. Years later, as he looked back on that broken vase, he felt grateful for the lessons it had taught him.

 




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