General Poetry posted March 26, 2023


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Darkness consumes silently and is relentnless

Trust

by G0dd0ll

Condescending Mastermind;

Your path is certain,                                                Always a narrow line.

Your words you fill with sweet designs.                         Relinquish scattered emotions left to remind,                         The flame of the hearts now eroded with time.

Why such a deliberate sorrow

To a love so fine?                                                 A Love that was meant to withstand all time.

Now though true souls are unveiled,                               They are still left in confines;

Urgently longing a significant sign;                                   To erase these illusions and forever define;                        The Passion between them that keeps them entwined.

Holdfast to the purities,

On which deceit dines.

The option... will truly...

Send chills down your spine.




Darkness writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about darkness. All forms of poetry welcomed.


I wrote this as the darkness of my Breakdown was overtaking me. Believing every word, playing my part true as each blackened memory took it's misguided place in the database of my sorrows and lost chances were blown out of proportion by the menacing darkness that held my soul in limbo.. Once you lose it...& I do mean everything, if you get it back, I assure you. It won't happen again.
Not to me.
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