Carnage

by Lea Tonin1

twist and turn bewilderment burns.

warp and churn the hurt returns

Weep and sigh wondering why

Break and bleed a hopeless cry

Rip and tear my open chest bare

Wonder where's the heart that was there.

In his hand he holds it square.

squeezing, bending crippling snare

Oh this woe has got to be stowed

The void is darker than you know

My soul shouts in blended whispers

Please make the journey much quicker.

For soon I'll blow like sand no thicker....

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Sad Poems writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression.

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