Blind Faith

by JLR

I made a choice to walk this way
tuned out some to walk this way.
because I had tested their path
unsure to where.

Knowing I am going somewhere
that God has planned is built by faith
I made a choice to walk this way,
unsure to where.

I stumbled on those other walks
too much ill will, way too much gin
selfish and headstrong, never wrong.
Unsure to where.

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March
2023

A Potlatch club submission.

The Baccresieza is: stanzaic, written in 3 quatrains.
* syllabic, L1, L2, L3 are 8 syllables and L4 is 4 syllables.
* refrained, L4 of each quatrain is a refrain and L1 of the first quatrain is repeated as L3 in the 2nd quatrain. The last 4 syllables of L1 are repeated as the last 4 syllables of L2 in the first quatrain only.
* rhymed, with a complicated rhyme scheme AaxB bxAB xxxB x being unrhymed.

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Blind Faith

by JLR

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