General Poetry posted February 27, 2023 Chapters:  ...24 25 -26- 27... 

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For A Very Special Lady

A chapter in the book Honoring others

Best Wishes Pam

by Debi Pick Marquette


We started both a year ago; were friends before we knew

We chatted about many things, that we both like to do

We had a common bond, but we sure never had a clue

One day when I was thanking her for such a nice review

I shared my birthday; then she said that it was her day too


It seems so strange that both of us, on the same day were born

A funny feeling to know one who also signs a form

Who adds your date of birth to theirs; it’s really not the norm

We've known the same amount of days, on this Earth I inform

 She's such a special woman, who's so loving, kind and warm 


Now Pam is leaving for a while to help her knowledge grow

She promises to pop in here, review and say hello 

We are the Bobsy Twins, but there is something you don’t know

Now we’re actually triplets, ‘cause another joined the show

Dr Nad was six days late, just like a guy to be so slow. :  )


There are some stormy rough seas, in your life you must comply

You are an awesome writer, to improve we all must try

We’ll miss you, but wish you the best; of this we can’t deny

Somehow, someday we’ll do 5k, on that you can rely

We love you more than words can say, so we won’t say goodbye




This tribute is for Pam Lonsdale, who is going through some health concerns for her husband as well as taking a little leave to improve her already wonderful writing skills. She promises to pop in and out to review and say hi.
I made this a little different as there are five lines in each stanza. I did it this way because she is such a unique and special lady.
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