Romance Poetry posted February 14, 2023


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finding love in the right place with the right face

Finally Finding love

by jake cosmos aller

Sam Adams frowned
He had gone to a bar
To look for love

Searching for a fellowship
Of lost souls
Being with the wrong faces
in the wrong places.

Dreading that once again
He would find
Disappointment
And a broken heart,

Hoping he would soon
See her there
The lady of his dreams
When he saw her there,

Sparks flew from
heart to heart
"isimchongsim."
as Koreans put it


He came up to her
Said hello
She smiled, saying,

"I have been waiting for you
What took you
So long to find me?"

That was the beginning
Of a 45-year-long affair
He no longer dreaded
a broken heart.

Finding that he had finally
Found the right woman
The right person
At the right time
in the right place.


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