Angry cloak

by royowen

I sometimes wear an angry cloak,
as in my fury comes the pain.
Yet underneath in blood I soak,
I cannot clear my name, my shame.

As in my fury comes the pain,
as ships are sometimes caught in storms.
I cannot clear my name, my shame.
if one survives, the rust still forms.

As ships are sometimes caught in storms,
though vapours vanish with the wind.
If one survives the rust still forms,
as time can never fate rescind.

Though vapours vanish with the wind,
yet underneath in blood I soak.
As time can never fate rescind.
I sometimes wear an angry cloak.

R.Owen 7/08/2022

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September
2022

Pantoum
The pantoum was originally a Malaysian form adopted by Europe
It consists of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines BCBC become 1st ans 3rd lines of the next stanza CDCD. you can write as many stanzas as you wish, but the last stanza must be Ã?Â¢?? The first line of the last is as follows:
The 4th and final stanza -
Line 2 of previous stanza Line 3 of the first stanza
Line 4 of previous stanza
Line 1 of he first stanza

Ephesians 4:26-27
Be angry and do not sin; do not let the sun go down on your anger, and give no opportunity to the devil. ESV
Ephesians 4:31
Let all bitterness and wrath and anger and clamor and slander be put away from you, along with all malice.
Thanks for reading. R.Owen

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