Supernatural Poetry posted July 13, 2022


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from a 1975 poem

sounds

by jake cosmos aller



Sounds and Sights

No one else sees or hears

Rising from the inner catacombs of the mind



Sounds

Hanging

Suspended

In the purple crystalline sky



Show us Your Early Poetry Vol. 3 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Share with us one of your oldest pieces of poetry, exactly as you wrote it. It doesn?t need to be your earliest work - just something old enough that you can see your progression as a writer. I want to see all those excessive ellipses, capitals at the start of every line, the abundance of semicolons, the pretentious repetition, the unnecessary line spaces that are.....

SO.....

IMPORTANT....

to my art!

I want you to swear on your honour you won't edit it before posting (adding an image is allowed, as we're in Fanstory Land). Other than that, no limitations.

Previous entrants are more than welcome, but remember these must be pieces you haven?t shared previously on Fanstory. Go digging in your old school notebooks with random scribblings in them - find us something fun and interesting!


one of my earliest poems written circa 1975
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