General Poetry posted July 12, 2022


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Feeling directionless

Where Do I Go From Here?

by BermyBye50



I've come

a long way

to grow

so short

maybe my

lack of

verve stunted

my gifts.

If I change

the scent

of my skin,

I'm in.

If I change

the time

of the sun.

If I stop

breathing

I wonder

where I'd go.



Show us Your Early Poetry Vol. 3 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Share with us one of your oldest pieces of poetry, exactly as you wrote it. It doesn?t need to be your earliest work - just something old enough that you can see your progression as a writer. I want to see all those excessive ellipses, capitals at the start of every line, the abundance of semicolons, the pretentious repetition, the unnecessary line spaces that are.....

SO.....

IMPORTANT....

to my art!

I want you to swear on your honour you won't edit it before posting (adding an image is allowed, as we're in Fanstory Land). Other than that, no limitations.

Previous entrants are more than welcome, but remember these must be pieces you haven?t shared previously on Fanstory. Go digging in your old school notebooks with random scribblings in them - find us something fun and interesting!
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