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A Day At The Beach

A chapter in the book Dribbles And Drabbles

Kahuna

by Brett Matthew West


Mary helped her young son build castles in the sand. She glanced up and told Pam she would try out the surfing lessons they'd planned. Enshrouded in her wetsuit, Mary disappeared into the breakers.

For a while, Pam watched Mary as Tyler shaped another castle. One hour later, no Mary. Pam scanned the waves' crests for a clue.

Screams of terror arose as beachcombers scattered. Mary's lavender-striped surfboard floated by. A tombstone-grey dorsal fin followed.



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Write a story on any topic. But you must use only 75 words to tell your story. Exactly 75 words. Title not included in the count.


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