General Fiction posted April 26, 2022


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Two young children visit their mother

The Visit

by Gunner Lil

Leah and Logan walked hand in hand down the slate stone pathway.
"Are we going to see mommy?" Asked Leah.
"Yes, we are," Logan said. "It has been over a year."
The stone walkway ended at a large circle of concrete with two sidewalks. One going west and one going east. Holding his sister's hand Logan guided Leah to the west walkway.
The children walked past huge red rose bushes leading to Logan's goal.
"She's over there." Logan pointed to a Maple tree. "It's the best place here."
Leah stopped at the grave marker. "I just know she loves it."



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Write a story of 100 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 100 words.

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