I could easily relate to this poem. Tired of the cold, so it was nice to escape (if only for a few moments) to a warmer place. :)
Something so few think about. Very well done, captured extreme emotions from so few words.
poem blossoms into a butterfly, transformation is unique.
I think that most of these don't follow haiku rules. Some do to some extent. A few, completely. So, you say, rules are made to be broken. Do what you want, but then don't call it a haiku. It is what it is, like it or not. Lol.
Really liked the word play here.
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