Og and Ugg ~ The Attack, Part 2
The battle for Og's people continues.18 total reviews
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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 A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review. |
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you very much, dear Committee. I am honored once again. The seven star recognition means so much. Sending along my best as always,
Sally :))
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image for the story, Sally.
-I am glad to see Og and Ugg back.
-This is a beautiful story, and I wish I had
another 6 star to award.
-It flowed well with excellent description
that was like the pace of the fine Arabian.
-You showed how everyone worked
together and no one got hurt in the process.
-In my opinion, that was the perfect thing to do;
it would have been easy to go the other route.
-I liked the teamwork of Og and Ugg.
-It was very touching when Og thought
of Ugg, and the "tears came like rain."
-This is a really good image:
"...a magic horse floating above the earth.
On it was a screaming she-devil
with a tornado in her right hand."
-The ending couldn't have been better.
[Glitterfy.com - *Glitter Photos*]
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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-A good image for the story, Sally.
-I am glad to see Og and Ugg back.
-This is a beautiful story, and I wish I had
another 6 star to award.
-It flowed well with excellent description
that was like the pace of the fine Arabian.
-You showed how everyone worked
together and no one got hurt in the process.
-In my opinion, that was the perfect thing to do;
it would have been easy to go the other route.
-I liked the teamwork of Og and Ugg.
-It was very touching when Og thought
of Ugg, and the "tears came like rain."
-This is a really good image:
"...a magic horse floating above the earth.
On it was a screaming she-devil
with a tornado in her right hand."
-The ending couldn't have been better.
[Glitterfy.com - *Glitter Photos*]
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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This is such a beautiful virtual six with pretty glittery stars! Thank you so much, dear Pam. :))
Your reviews and line by lime details always means so much to me. Sending my best today as always, Sally XO!
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You are very welcome, Sally, and I'm glad you liked the extra glittery stars.
Comment from lyenochka
It seems that Og and Ugg are a great team. I liked that Og trusted Ugg to make the right decisions for their family and it seems that they succeeded in protecting everyone.
" Lighting and thunder were all about her, eyes ablaze." (Lightning)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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It seems that Og and Ugg are a great team. I liked that Og trusted Ugg to make the right decisions for their family and it seems that they succeeded in protecting everyone.
" Lighting and thunder were all about her, eyes ablaze." (Lightning)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and helpful critique. I cannot tell you how many times I've missed spelled lightning. It's almost comical. I'm not sure why my voice keyboard saves misspelled words but it does. I appreciate you so much! Sending my messages as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from poetwatch
Sally, you let your hair hang down. :) It's good. I especially like these lines, "Coming through the night appeared to be a magic horse floating above the earth. On it was a screaming she-devil with a tornado in her right hand. Lighting and thunder were all about her, eyes ablaze." Hell is the fury of a woman warrior protecting her young. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Sally, you let your hair hang down. :) It's good. I especially like these lines, "Coming through the night appeared to be a magic horse floating above the earth. On it was a screaming she-devil with a tornado in her right hand. Lighting and thunder were all about her, eyes ablaze." Hell is the fury of a woman warrior protecting her young. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Yeah I let my hair hang down on this one all right. I'm glad you enjoyed it. My hair is the wildest thing in the world, so I decided to put it in the story. I'm really so glad you enjoyed this and I appreciate your review so much along with the generous stars. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Soooo..... is this the end of Ugg and Og's tale? Do we ever hear again about how Rock and Willow grow up..? ;) :) Wonderful installment, Lady Sal, with a reassuring bit of faith woven in there even so long even before time was being recorded! :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Soooo..... is this the end of Ugg and Og's tale? Do we ever hear again about how Rock and Willow grow up..? ;) :) Wonderful installment, Lady Sal, with a reassuring bit of faith woven in there even so long even before time was being recorded! :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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No, just the end of the two part attack. I thank you for championing my ages past couple and their twins. I'm sick and will need to slow a bit. I have some things I have already written and stored for posting. I just haven't been able to review very much to earn fan money. I wrote this about three weeks ago. I'm really glad I did. Yes, you will see them again. Stay well!!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sally, this is a lovely piece of work. Some of your descriptive passages are lovely. I particularly like "She-creatures are full of mystery, like a deep well. You cannot see how deep until you lower the vessel," the elder would say on many occasions.' - this is really lovely. The descriptive passage with Ugg on the Arabian is colourful and well worded. The whole is well written and a lovely read. Love Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Hello Sally, this is a lovely piece of work. Some of your descriptive passages are lovely. I particularly like "She-creatures are full of mystery, like a deep well. You cannot see how deep until you lower the vessel," the elder would say on many occasions.' - this is really lovely. The descriptive passage with Ugg on the Arabian is colourful and well worded. The whole is well written and a lovely read. Love Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous starshine! Your kind attention to my work means the world to me. Sending you my best today as e,
Sally xoxoxo!!
Comment from Drew Delaney
Your story is nicely done. Good writing and no SPAG'S that I took note of. I loved the last part in particular besides some good imagery in the rest. I hope all is well your way. Stay safe!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Your story is nicely done. Good writing and no SPAG'S that I took note of. I loved the last part in particular besides some good imagery in the rest. I hope all is well your way. Stay safe!
Drew xx
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you, dear Drew. Your wonderful review and generous stars means so much to me. I'm so pleased you enjoyed Og and Ugg. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, I love how Ugg has a leading place in this story and how she's not afraid of showing the the way when it comes to attacking. But, Og respects it. And so he should. I love the story. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Sally, I love how Ugg has a leading place in this story and how she's not afraid of showing the the way when it comes to attacking. But, Og respects it. And so he should. I love the story. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind comments, dear Ulla. I'm so glad you're enjoying my ancient couple. Sending my best today as always, Sally
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I like it that you made the female the rock slinging superhero! This is very different! WHERE do your thoughts come from? While reading it, we are placed in the setting, just in the way you write. I noticed that in your book. That is a gift! To even use cave people as the characters, an unusual though process! Love it! Hats off to you, my friend! :)
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I like it that you made the female the rock slinging superhero! This is very different! WHERE do your thoughts come from? While reading it, we are placed in the setting, just in the way you write. I noticed that in your book. That is a gift! To even use cave people as the characters, an unusual though process! Love it! Hats off to you, my friend! :)
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Yeah, I have a little bit of Ugg inside of me. I'm very protective and my hair is crazy wild and hard to tame. Thank you once again for the complimentary review and kind words. I appreciate you so.
Sending you my best today as always
Sal xoxoxoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Sal. Ugg is as good a soldier as she is a wife and mother. She has mastered the sling and volunteered to fight it intruders alongside Og. That says a lot about her courage and her character. Og is fortunate to have her with him.
Pal Z :-)))
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Sal. Ugg is as good a soldier as she is a wife and mother. She has mastered the sling and volunteered to fight it intruders alongside Og. That says a lot about her courage and her character. Og is fortunate to have her with him.
Pal Z :-)))
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments, dear Z. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Your pal :)
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You're very welcome Sal.
Pal Z :>)))