For Just One Day
A Rondeau for Potlatch Poetry30 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, what beautiful imagery in this lovely poem, Yvonne. This is one I will have to enjoy more than once, for sure! It's going into my bookcase, and please know, it is yet another work of art I wish I could rate properly -- I'm out of sixes this week.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Oh, what beautiful imagery in this lovely poem, Yvonne. This is one I will have to enjoy more than once, for sure! It's going into my bookcase, and please know, it is yet another work of art I wish I could rate properly -- I'm out of sixes this week.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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I'm so glad you liked it. I don't worry about the stars. Thank you for bookcasing it. That's very flattering.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely thoughts in your Rondeau Yvonne and lovely descriptions in each stanza, the eagle's silhouette against the sun, the whippoorwills sweet lullabye, pretty pictures you paint. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Lovely thoughts in your Rondeau Yvonne and lovely descriptions in each stanza, the eagle's silhouette against the sun, the whippoorwills sweet lullabye, pretty pictures you paint. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Yvonne. This is a nicely composed Rondeau with good rhyme and your repeating phrase, "for just one day." Certain things we may find appealing are worth the wait. We'd like to have the chance for just a day. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Hi Yvonne. This is a nicely composed Rondeau with good rhyme and your repeating phrase, "for just one day." Certain things we may find appealing are worth the wait. We'd like to have the chance for just a day. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Wouldn't it be wonderful! Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Therese Caron
I'm pretty stingy when it comes to giving out six stars, since we are allowed so few. This is a beautifully written poem, use of lovely words like swooping, and whippoorwill , and the rhyming is wonderful. The image you chose and the background color with the white font are striking. Beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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I'm pretty stingy when it comes to giving out six stars, since we are allowed so few. This is a beautifully written poem, use of lovely words like swooping, and whippoorwill , and the rhyming is wonderful. The image you chose and the background color with the white font are striking. Beautiful poem!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful review and lovely remarks.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery, rhyme,
and repeating phrase.
-I like your premise of
being able to fly like
an eagle "for just one day."
-The second verse is very
good as you imagine pirate
ships full of treasure.
-A very good conclusion, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery, rhyme,
and repeating phrase.
-I like your premise of
being able to fly like
an eagle "for just one day."
-The second verse is very
good as you imagine pirate
ships full of treasure.
-A very good conclusion, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Susan Larson
What an imaginative fantasy! You make me want to fly along with you across that golden sky. What a great picture of what we would fly over. Very nice!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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What an imaginative fantasy! You make me want to fly along with you across that golden sky. What a great picture of what we would fly over. Very nice!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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When I learn how to do it, I'll fly over and pick you up. lol. Thanks, Susan.
Yvonne
Comment from Ulla
And what a wonderful Rondeau this is, Yvonne. It's beautifully written and your wish doesn't seem at all unreasonable to me. A pleasure to read and with such great imagery and imagination. I loved it. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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And what a wonderful Rondeau this is, Yvonne. It's beautifully written and your wish doesn't seem at all unreasonable to me. A pleasure to read and with such great imagery and imagination. I loved it. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Ulla. Always glad to hear your opinion.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very original rondeau. I love the idea of this one day treat that involves some fantastic but wonderful desires. To fly with the eagles. Now that would be something.
A very well-formed rondeau.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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This is a very original rondeau. I love the idea of this one day treat that involves some fantastic but wonderful desires. To fly with the eagles. Now that would be something.
A very well-formed rondeau.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Wouldn't it be wonderful, even if just for one day. Thank you so much for a great review, and for 'getting' my meaning.
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds like a daydream to have adventures. I have the answers to your first two stanzas. Go parasailing at sunset. And go to Chicago during the Summer and take a ride on the Tall Ship there where 3pm on one of the weekend days the workers on the ship dress as pirates.
Well written rondeau for the potlatch.
Happy Holidays.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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This sounds like a daydream to have adventures. I have the answers to your first two stanzas. Go parasailing at sunset. And go to Chicago during the Summer and take a ride on the Tall Ship there where 3pm on one of the weekend days the workers on the ship dress as pirates.
Well written rondeau for the potlatch.
Happy Holidays.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Oooo, I'd love to do just that. Maybe you will go in my stead and tell me about it. Thank you for this great review.
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Which one.
You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Eyvonne A really well written Rondeau for the potlatch and I enjoyed your content theme as you made it easy to imagine flying with the eagles across the sky. You rhythm and rhyme superb in the telling ,If only Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Hi Eyvonne A really well written Rondeau for the potlatch and I enjoyed your content theme as you made it easy to imagine flying with the eagles across the sky. You rhythm and rhyme superb in the telling ,If only Cheers Chris
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful review.