Back in the Saddle
Back to writing after an extended absence18 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAHA. This sounds like what David Sedaris does...he follows people and listens to their conversations then writes about them. "Mrs. Haversham" pretends she one type, then, when she's done, she returns to her car, whips out her notebooks and pens and starts recounting the episode. Wicked. Wicked and delightful! A writer's got to do whatever is necessary. What real writer doesn't know THAT!!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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HAHAHAHAHA. This sounds like what David Sedaris does...he follows people and listens to their conversations then writes about them. "Mrs. Haversham" pretends she one type, then, when she's done, she returns to her car, whips out her notebooks and pens and starts recounting the episode. Wicked. Wicked and delightful! A writer's got to do whatever is necessary. What real writer doesn't know THAT!!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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All writers are a tad wicked. Even those romance writers. Don't let them fool you. Haha. Thanks for these reviews. They are a great help.
Gretchen
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Sure! I had the best time reading reading. I never got bored.
Comment from JudyE
I think many readers can relate to getting nervous then talking too much.
I picked up a couple of small points:
incase she ever needed to jimmie a lock - two words - in case
"Mrs. Havesham, I presume, " a tall, handsome middle aged man, motioned her inside. - comma after 'handsome'. There is an extra space between the comma and speech marks after 'presume'
"Its been thirty years - apostrophe needed - it's
I hope I can work the til. - spelling - the till.
I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes
Judy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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I think many readers can relate to getting nervous then talking too much.
I picked up a couple of small points:
incase she ever needed to jimmie a lock - two words - in case
"Mrs. Havesham, I presume, " a tall, handsome middle aged man, motioned her inside. - comma after 'handsome'. There is an extra space between the comma and speech marks after 'presume'
"Its been thirty years - apostrophe needed - it's
I hope I can work the til. - spelling - the till.
I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes
Judy
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your review and the helpful hints. Much appreciated.
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from royowen
Welcome back Gretchen, just when I was thinking of leaving next year, you turn up. I just loved this post, did you keep up your membership while you were away? Well done my friend, you're right about writing, it's a drug. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Welcome back Gretchen, just when I was thinking of leaving next year, you turn up. I just loved this post, did you keep up your membership while you were away? Well done my friend, you're right about writing, it's a drug. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Please dont let your membership lapse. I loved your poetry. Thank you for your warm welcome back and review
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You?re loved here Gretchen
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Awe, how sweet.❤
Comment from w.j.debi
Finding a job after thirty years is going to be difficult. She is lucky to find someone who will give her a chance. A hardware store does wouldn't like fun. It is bound to be a fun adventure.
Youshow the emotions well and make your character believable.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Finding a job after thirty years is going to be difficult. She is lucky to find someone who will give her a chance. A hardware store does wouldn't like fun. It is bound to be a fun adventure.
Youshow the emotions well and make your character believable.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Gretchen, Hi! It is so good to see you again. I knew if I stuck around some of you would return! LOL I missed you my friend and have thought about you often. I saw one typo.
His eyebrows raised ever so slightly then [he] nodded.
You are in fine fettle my friend. Good day to you! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Gretchen, Hi! It is so good to see you again. I knew if I stuck around some of you would return! LOL I missed you my friend and have thought about you often. I saw one typo.
His eyebrows raised ever so slightly then [he] nodded.
You are in fine fettle my friend. Good day to you! Nancy:)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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I've missed reading your poetry. Just couldnt justify paying when I couldnt find time to be on site. I just miss writing. Thank you
Comment from humpwhistle
Welcome back to the world of the writing, my friend.
I can't see that you've acquire any rust during your absence.
Mrs Haversham is an interesting creation. The contents of her
purse reflect the lady herself.
Welcome back.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Welcome back to the world of the writing, my friend.
I can't see that you've acquire any rust during your absence.
Mrs Haversham is an interesting creation. The contents of her
purse reflect the lady herself.
Welcome back.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Lee!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Cute story. I enjoyed the description of Mrs. Havesham. She is a rare lady of yesteryear, that we seldom see in today's world. That's a sad thing. Thank you for sharing this post.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Cute story. I enjoyed the description of Mrs. Havesham. She is a rare lady of yesteryear, that we seldom see in today's world. That's a sad thing. Thank you for sharing this post.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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She may be back. Not as a book but her journey in snippets. Thank you
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey G. And a big hardy welcome back to you. I love your tote full of goodies. The box of raisins and triple A batteries are of course an absolute necessity.
And I also enjoyed the allusion to Great Expectations. Even though in that wonderful novel she was a Miss and slightly different name spelling, your write still made me think of that, and it was a pleasant thought.
Ha, I wouldn't think working in a hardware store would be easy, but then I guess you never know.
Yep she is back among the living and with many fascinating tales to spin.
A most enjoyable read. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Hey G. And a big hardy welcome back to you. I love your tote full of goodies. The box of raisins and triple A batteries are of course an absolute necessity.
And I also enjoyed the allusion to Great Expectations. Even though in that wonderful novel she was a Miss and slightly different name spelling, your write still made me think of that, and it was a pleasant thought.
Ha, I wouldn't think working in a hardware store would be easy, but then I guess you never know.
Yep she is back among the living and with many fascinating tales to spin.
A most enjoyable read. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Welcome back. The story shows an aging woman getting back into the world through work. I do wonder why she wanted to leave just as he had hired her. More likely she would stay and learn the layout at least. And he would have told her when to report for work, definitely. The story needs at least that much.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Welcome back. The story shows an aging woman getting back into the world through work. I do wonder why she wanted to leave just as he had hired her. More likely she would stay and learn the layout at least. And he would have told her when to report for work, definitely. The story needs at least that much.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you. She will be back!
Comment from Sankey
This was good. Glad you said 2 years, I did wonder, as I had not seen you in ages.Officially I should have gone back to Basic today as I am moving out, unless some kind soul has paid for more Premier time for me. Good seeing an old face. You know Dean Kuch and Michael Cahill have died, I presume. Charley Lewis has died or is very ill and not around either. Welcome back. Good story.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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This was good. Glad you said 2 years, I did wonder, as I had not seen you in ages.Officially I should have gone back to Basic today as I am moving out, unless some kind soul has paid for more Premier time for me. Good seeing an old face. You know Dean Kuch and Michael Cahill have died, I presume. Charley Lewis has died or is very ill and not around either. Welcome back. Good story.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you but I believe you can post and you should. I had heard about them, terribly sad.