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Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Where It Belongs"From victim to survivor of abuse.
17 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
Firstly I love your artwork and presentation. The text is so easy to read. The poem is very thought provoking. Childhood abuse is so unthinkable. Very well written. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Firstly I love your artwork and presentation. The text is so easy to read. The poem is very thought provoking. Childhood abuse is so unthinkable. Very well written. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a supportive and kind review.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from karenina
Triumphantly inspiring poem! When we throw off the victim's cloak and with all appropriate support don the survivor's cape it is emancipation! How powerful to declare
All attempts to crush you failed miserably! This is an anthem for so many! Me, as well...
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Triumphantly inspiring poem! When we throw off the victim's cloak and with all appropriate support don the survivor's cape it is emancipation! How powerful to declare
All attempts to crush you failed miserably! This is an anthem for so many! Me, as well...
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanks Karenina.
I appreciate your review message.
May God Bless You too.
Blessings
Shirley
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I am sorry you were not loved and cared for as a child. None of it was your fault...Karenina
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Thanks for your empathy it touches my heart.
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Hugs!--K
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is emotional! I love how you take us on your journey through the pain to the other side-joy! Not all can heal from difficult situations. Your rhyme and flow are very well done and i like your little separators! Great work!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This is emotional! I love how you take us on your journey through the pain to the other side-joy! Not all can heal from difficult situations. Your rhyme and flow are very well done and i like your little separators! Great work!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much.
Blessings
Shirley
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Welcome!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem is excellent in every respect: It conveys a message of victory
over the past, with God's help, and peace of mind; and the form is
superb--with rhyming and metrical patterns sustained throughout and
effective use of specifics.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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This poem is excellent in every respect: It conveys a message of victory
over the past, with God's help, and peace of mind; and the form is
superb--with rhyming and metrical patterns sustained throughout and
effective use of specifics.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your time.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Gloria ....
This is incredibly well written, Shirley. You entire presentation if perfect for the harrowing journey from being abused in childhood to reconciliation.
Your ballad metre and rhyme is mostly spot on, with just one little metre thing in this line:
no longer come in dark of night. You have two syllables too many, and this is an easy repair for you.
Excellent poem and another fine addition to your personal journey through childhood darkness.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This is incredibly well written, Shirley. You entire presentation if perfect for the harrowing journey from being abused in childhood to reconciliation.
Your ballad metre and rhyme is mostly spot on, with just one little metre thing in this line:
no longer come in dark of night. You have two syllables too many, and this is an easy repair for you.
Excellent poem and another fine addition to your personal journey through childhood darkness.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks Gloria,
I really appreciate your kind and generous six star review.
This poem is a part of me and your respectful support is appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. We all have hard times that we struggle with but when we find God along our path it seems our troubles fading away and our lives become easier each day.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. We all have hard times that we struggle with but when we find God along our path it seems our troubles fading away and our lives become easier each day.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks Sandra
I appreciate your kind review and understanding.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Letting go of the past helps us move on and be more positive. We cannot change it and allowing forgiveness helps us to heal, I could identify with your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Letting go of the past helps us move on and be more positive. We cannot change it and allowing forgiveness helps us to heal, I could identify with your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks Dolly,
You are appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You have written a very moving poem here, Shirley.
Child abuse is a terrible thing and we know God witnessed all of it and as you say he left the door ajar for you to find the light, forgive your abuser, and move on. Poetry is
therapeutic. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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You have written a very moving poem here, Shirley.
Child abuse is a terrible thing and we know God witnessed all of it and as you say he left the door ajar for you to find the light, forgive your abuser, and move on. Poetry is
therapeutic. Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks Nancy,
I appreciate your kind review.
You are a wonderful mentor and Fanstory friend.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Teri7
Shirley, This is a very well written poem about putting the past where it belongs. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Thank you for sharing with us. The road from abuse to well being is a hard road and I am thankful we have the Lord with us! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Shirley, This is a very well written poem about putting the past where it belongs. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Thank you for sharing with us. The road from abuse to well being is a hard road and I am thankful we have the Lord with us! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Hi Teri,
Thanks for a kind and understanding review.
You are appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from royowen
When one has children of our own, and then grandchildren, they are so beautiful, and all I want to do is to shield them and love them, because I adore their sweet souls.thats why it hurts me to read of the abuse undeserved, it's a lifetime sentence. I'm so sorry, Shirley, but God is in to miracles, beautifully written dear girl. Written 8686 ballad style, and abcb rhyming, it moved me deeply, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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When one has children of our own, and then grandchildren, they are so beautiful, and all I want to do is to shield them and love them, because I adore their sweet souls.thats why it hurts me to read of the abuse undeserved, it's a lifetime sentence. I'm so sorry, Shirley, but God is in to miracles, beautifully written dear girl. Written 8686 ballad style, and abcb rhyming, it moved me deeply, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Hi Roy,
Thank you dear friend for an understanding and kind review.
Blessings
Shirley
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Bless you for sharing Shirley