The Minx and the Mensch
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Comment from Rmocruz
You have presented a total tease for us dirty minded reviewers.
You have well conformed to the writing prompt.
Very interesting and entertaining.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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You have presented a total tease for us dirty minded reviewers.
You have well conformed to the writing prompt.
Very interesting and entertaining.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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You bad, naughty boy, Rmocruz. Shame, shame, shame! (And thank gawd for you; otherwise, what would have been my point in even writing this?!!)
As you can see, I loved this review!
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A well placed bra can do wonders.
Pleased you loved the review!
You're welcome!
Comment from Randa Dayle
Your carnal caperings...is carnal! Wink~ Wink~ I wish you luck in the contest, I see nothing that needs to be fixed. Good job, and continue to share with us!
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Your carnal caperings...is carnal! Wink~ Wink~ I wish you luck in the contest, I see nothing that needs to be fixed. Good job, and continue to share with us!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of dialogue, specific details, and very suggestive innuendo to lead the reader right up to--GETTING THE
SHUTTERS DISLODGED!! LOL!
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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You have made excellent use of dialogue, specific details, and very suggestive innuendo to lead the reader right up to--GETTING THE
SHUTTERS DISLODGED!! LOL!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I am a bad, bad, naughty girl, Janice.
Thanks for your fun review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
So, this was always going to have a twist ending - it was just a question of what it would be. Well done for keeping the double meaning going to the end. Now we just need to know what the neighbours were doing. More carnal capering perhaps?
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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So, this was always going to have a twist ending - it was just a question of what it would be. Well done for keeping the double meaning going to the end. Now we just need to know what the neighbours were doing. More carnal capering perhaps?
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Well, they WERE in their bedroom, after all! I hope, for their sake, they were doing more than sorting laundry!! hahaha
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Haha you had me fooled! Shutters indeed...and then to spy the neighbours going at it in their garage!! I enjoyed this, and hope it brings you great reward in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Haha you had me fooled! Shutters indeed...and then to spy the neighbours going at it in their garage!! I enjoyed this, and hope it brings you great reward in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Why, gypsymooncat! I think YOU'RE sounding like a bit of a minx here!! hahahaha.
Thank you for this terrific review!
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Lol wink wink
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I KNEW IT!!!
Comment from Bichon
Haha, a very funny write. You can put lots of this in the wrong context, this one was quite funny though. Best of luck in the contest with this entry!
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Haha, a very funny write. You can put lots of this in the wrong context, this one was quite funny though. Best of luck in the contest with this entry!
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Yep! You read it correctly then!! I'm glad you liked it, Bichon.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an extremely clever and fun approach to complying with the prompt - though I felt secure my anticipate conclusion would prove accurate. it was still an entertaining experience in the read. Best of luck in the contest with this adroit write...
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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In my opinion, an extremely clever and fun approach to complying with the prompt - though I felt secure my anticipate conclusion would prove accurate. it was still an entertaining experience in the read. Best of luck in the contest with this adroit write...
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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I'm so glad you had fun with this, Eve. Thanks for the very nice review.
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You are very welcome indeed, Michele?...Eve
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Nope.
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Sorry - thank you for your response...Eve
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Gawd knows I've been called worse!!! hahahaha
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I find that difficult to believe, in light of your writing talent...Eve
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The in-laws. Enough said, I trust!
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Again, sorry, though I cannot relate, I understand...Eve
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
You had me, Contestant, I thought THEY were doing it, but they were peeping on their neighbours doing it! LoL!
Nice twist.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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You had me, Contestant, I thought THEY were doing it, but they were peeping on their neighbours doing it! LoL!
Nice twist.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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But first they had to tear out the inside shutters so their view was no longer obstructed! hahaha. I scare me sometimes with the way my mind works. Thank you for the terrific review.
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Yeah, so I see. LoL! Very funny indeed!
You're welcome!
Comment from LG Wolfe
I'm having so much fun reading these contest entries, and yours is right up there, with the excellent twist at the end. I had an inkling it might be blinds when I saw the image, but got so caught up in the more obviously stated story that I still enjoyed the twist. Funny and sexy, great job!
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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I'm having so much fun reading these contest entries, and yours is right up there, with the excellent twist at the end. I had an inkling it might be blinds when I saw the image, but got so caught up in the more obviously stated story that I still enjoyed the twist. Funny and sexy, great job!
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you, Lisa. I'm glad I was able to leave you feeling satisfied...
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Thoroughly so.
Comment from bhogg
I would say you met the requirements of carnal caperings. Your post was well written. You did a good job of creating anticipation, only to have a somewhat surprise ending. Good luck in your contest. Bill
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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I would say you met the requirements of carnal caperings. Your post was well written. You did a good job of creating anticipation, only to have a somewhat surprise ending. Good luck in your contest. Bill
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you, Bill! It was nice reading this terrific review.