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A talltale about the Old West16 total reviews
Comment from john mallahan
Never been much into guns, but guess that's how the west was won. Or, are we just speculating? Again fine. We gotta write about, what we know...or has been told.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Never been much into guns, but guess that's how the west was won. Or, are we just speculating? Again fine. We gotta write about, what we know...or has been told.
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Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Review received.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I do so love those old western tales. Seems they have all but gone away so those willing must dig them up with their boot straps. Nicely done. This was a great read.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I do so love those old western tales. Seems they have all but gone away so those willing must dig them up with their boot straps. Nicely done. This was a great read.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
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Comment from Gail Denham
Well done western poem. Can you imagine living in a town like that. Sure wouldn't let my kids play in the front yard in some of those towns. But for some reason, the west drew outlaws easily.
Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Well done western poem. Can you imagine living in a town like that. Sure wouldn't let my kids play in the front yard in some of those towns. But for some reason, the west drew outlaws easily.
Good job.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun gun slinger story Brett, much enjoyed, a Wild West story full of action, I wish you luck with the contest, your story is a worthy entry, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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A fun gun slinger story Brett, much enjoyed, a Wild West story full of action, I wish you luck with the contest, your story is a worthy entry, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
Comment from l.raven
HI Brett, wish I had a six my sweet friend...******...this is a great story told...I am so glad some one stood up to them...and won...I love your story told...and loveeeeee this picture...Sam Elliott...WOW!!!...sooooo handsome...and an awesome actor...very well written...and I hope you do well in the contest...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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HI Brett, wish I had a six my sweet friend...******...this is a great story told...I am so glad some one stood up to them...and won...I love your story told...and loveeeeee this picture...Sam Elliott...WOW!!!...sooooo handsome...and an awesome actor...very well written...and I hope you do well in the contest...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and the review.
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your so welcome Brett...Happy Easter my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author
Ha ha ha!) This is a great western story poem and a really good contest entry. Nothing to suggest you revise. Good luck, thanks for sharing, and Happy Easter. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author
Ha ha ha!) This is a great western story poem and a really good contest entry. Nothing to suggest you revise. Good luck, thanks for sharing, and Happy Easter. Jan :-)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and the review. Happy Easter to you too!
Comment from judiverse
Great entry for the story in a poem contest, and best of luck. You have a great story about law and order in the Old West. Interesting that the outlaws somehow became heroes, but that's the way it was. Maybe it was because Billy didn't run that he became a hero. Excellent work with the rhyme and flow in this, too. judi
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Great entry for the story in a poem contest, and best of luck. You have a great story about law and order in the Old West. Interesting that the outlaws somehow became heroes, but that's the way it was. Maybe it was because Billy didn't run that he became a hero. Excellent work with the rhyme and flow in this, too. judi
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate the review.
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You're very welcome. The rhyme went to well with your story, as did the wording. judi
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Brett. I loved the story. When I first came across the name Billy, I was thinking Billy the Kid. I liked the flow of the piece and the rhyme scheme gave it a rhythm like riding a horse. Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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This was a good read, Brett. I loved the story. When I first came across the name Billy, I was thinking Billy the Kid. I liked the flow of the piece and the rhyme scheme gave it a rhythm like riding a horse. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, this is a wonderful free verse poem, and a whole new side to your very talented writing. Well,at lest, so it is to me.I loved it ad the story within. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Hi Brett, this is a wonderful free verse poem, and a whole new side to your very talented writing. Well,at lest, so it is to me.I loved it ad the story within. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Nice shoot em out western with the good guy winning. I especially like the picture you have displayed. He is one of my all time favorites. Great job. Have a nice day. Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Nice shoot em out western with the good guy winning. I especially like the picture you have displayed. He is one of my all time favorites. Great job. Have a nice day. Shirley
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.