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Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "I pray."From victim to survivor of abuse.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, I Pray, reveals to the readers that some childhood event or situation has been set aside through the faith in a God who can lift our hearts and minds away from the world and into a realm of truth and peace. Nice.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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This poem, I Pray, reveals to the readers that some childhood event or situation has been set aside through the faith in a God who can lift our hearts and minds away from the world and into a realm of truth and peace. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks Bill.
I appreciate your review.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well done Shirley. I like the picture you have chosen. You are getting really good at meter. This is a wonderful testimonial to the healing power of God when we take time to pray. Well done my dear. Blessings. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Well done Shirley. I like the picture you have chosen. You are getting really good at meter. This is a wonderful testimonial to the healing power of God when we take time to pray. Well done my dear. Blessings. Nancy:)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks Nancy,
Your review and encouragement is appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Treischel
A very powerful sentiment expressed in these well written abcb rhymed quatrains. You should get someone to set it to music, as it would make an excellent anthem for the battered of the world.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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A very powerful sentiment expressed in these well written abcb rhymed quatrains. You should get someone to set it to music, as it would make an excellent anthem for the battered of the world.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you.
That's a wonderful idea but probably out of my reach.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Sally Law
This is outstanding! Your artwork told the story, as well. Most writers don't realize how important artwork is to their piece and how it frames--enhancing the words. Thank you for sharing these deep emotions and I am so glad to hear that God has healed this terrible thing done to you. I, too, had a past like yours. My Lord did the same for me.
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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This is outstanding! Your artwork told the story, as well. Most writers don't realize how important artwork is to their piece and how it frames--enhancing the words. Thank you for sharing these deep emotions and I am so glad to hear that God has healed this terrible thing done to you. I, too, had a past like yours. My Lord did the same for me.
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sally,
Your kind review is much appreciated.
I'm so glad you also found solace with the Lord.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
I love your poem the words are deep and meaningful and written from the heart. It is well edited and well presented. The artwork compliments the words perfectly, where on earth did you find it?
I'm sure there are many out there who will identify with the words in your poem. I hope they can take inspiration from your words and move on like you have.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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I love your poem the words are deep and meaningful and written from the heart. It is well edited and well presented. The artwork compliments the words perfectly, where on earth did you find it?
I'm sure there are many out there who will identify with the words in your poem. I hope they can take inspiration from your words and move on like you have.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much for reviewing.
I appreciate your understanding.
Blessings
Shirley