Ex-con
A man gets in trouble20 total reviews
Comment from gramag4
This is quite a clever little adventure. Such a quick and fun way to tell the story. The photo really compliments the story line. Thanks for sharing. Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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This is quite a clever little adventure. Such a quick and fun way to tell the story. The photo really compliments the story line. Thanks for sharing. Great job!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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Thank you gramag4 for your nice review. Nice to see you tonight.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Pam,all that for a cup of coffee...and a bowl of oatmeal...LOL...sometimes crime doesn't pay....I love your story told sweet girl....very well written....and the perfect picture...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Hi Pam,all that for a cup of coffee...and a bowl of oatmeal...LOL...sometimes crime doesn't pay....I love your story told sweet girl....very well written....and the perfect picture...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you Linda for your wonderful review. Much appreciated
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Your so welcome sweet girl...lovexxoo
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and yes by the sound of it he should have got into trouble being in the house with a gun is cause enough, a very well written poem and story****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Excellent and yes by the sound of it he should have got into trouble being in the house with a gun is cause enough, a very well written poem and story****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you kahpot for a really nice review
Comment from Michele Harber
Wow! No one can say you don't write interesting poems. This read like a novella in rhyme. The storyline and characters were all clearly laid out, and the plot progressed in clear narrative format, with the rhymes coming easily and not detracting from the story. This is a very well-done poem.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Wow! No one can say you don't write interesting poems. This read like a novella in rhyme. The storyline and characters were all clearly laid out, and the plot progressed in clear narrative format, with the rhymes coming easily and not detracting from the story. This is a very well-done poem.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you Michele for your awesome review. Much appreciated
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Much deserved!
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
Very dramatic poem that had good speed and keeps the readers attention. I wanted to know what would happen, and was involved in the story the same as when you get hooked on a tv drama or soap opera. You are also really great at getting a good rhythm going and at rhyming. Your poems have such diversity and range in subjects too which I really like. Hayley x
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Very dramatic poem that had good speed and keeps the readers attention. I wanted to know what would happen, and was involved in the story the same as when you get hooked on a tv drama or soap opera. You are also really great at getting a good rhythm going and at rhyming. Your poems have such diversity and range in subjects too which I really like. Hayley x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you Hayley. I am glad we met. I appreciate the awesome review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made a fun poem about a serious situation and ex-cons have a hard time finding work and moving on after a spell in prison, shooting someone with the intention of killing them should carry a life sentence, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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You made a fun poem about a serious situation and ex-cons have a hard time finding work and moving on after a spell in prison, shooting someone with the intention of killing them should carry a life sentence, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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He shot himself. Thank you Dolly for your lovely review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem story about the times we don't think cearly and get ourselves in very big trouble that it means we need to go to prison for what we did, and change our lives forever.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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A very well-written poem story about the times we don't think cearly and get ourselves in very big trouble that it means we need to go to prison for what we did, and change our lives forever.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good story in a poem you have penned. You are very good writing these type of poems. You used very good descriptive words, very good imagery and very good rhyme. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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This is a very good story in a poem you have penned. You are very good writing these type of poems. You used very good descriptive words, very good imagery and very good rhyme. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you Teri for your wonderful review
Comment from Pantygynt
When I was a child I remember a book of poems that were known in those days as 'cautionary tales', instructions to kids as to how they should and should not behave. This, it seems to me, is in the same vein aimed at young adults rather than kids. Isntead of being warned not to eat little bits of string, the crime here is abduction and murder. I found this an interesting progression.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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When I was a child I remember a book of poems that were known in those days as 'cautionary tales', instructions to kids as to how they should and should not behave. This, it seems to me, is in the same vein aimed at young adults rather than kids. Isntead of being warned not to eat little bits of string, the crime here is abduction and murder. I found this an interesting progression.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you Jim for your wonderful review.
Comment from Robbie Yates
Great poem detailing a very exciting scene! I love the "Romeo and Julietness" of it - she didn't die, but he thought she did - and the ending. Well done - a really enjoyable piece!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Great poem detailing a very exciting scene! I love the "Romeo and Julietness" of it - she didn't die, but he thought she did - and the ending. Well done - a really enjoyable piece!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you Robbie for a wonderful review