Sunny days are here again
It's nice to see white fluffy clouds again.13 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
This post is light hearted , and I hope that's a feeling better sign from you. I love puffy clouds. From the air they are like drapes as we travel in and out of them. I enjoyed reading your Haiku , good luck in the contest
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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This post is light hearted , and I hope that's a feeling better sign from you. I love puffy clouds. From the air they are like drapes as we travel in and out of them. I enjoyed reading your Haiku , good luck in the contest
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your feedback, it was greatly appreciated.PM
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No problem!
Comment from smileycloud
really lovely poem
the magic of the word imagery is beautifully executed
a very fine entry
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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really lovely poem
the magic of the word imagery is beautifully executed
a very fine entry
have a smiley day
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your feedback. It is greatly appreciated. PM
Comment from Irish Rain
I love the dark of winter....but...I realize most don't, and this is a beautiful tribute to sunny days for you and them. Hope you have many!! Loved the 'candy cotton!' Blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I love the dark of winter....but...I realize most don't, and this is a beautiful tribute to sunny days for you and them. Hope you have many!! Loved the 'candy cotton!' Blessings...
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the feedback. Sunny days have been few and far between recently. Call this wishful thinkiing. PM
Comment from Mistydawn
I love you vivid imagery of the clouds, it set a calm relaxing tone for the poem. The artwork is beautiful, bright, cheery. Great job as always, good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I love you vivid imagery of the clouds, it set a calm relaxing tone for the poem. The artwork is beautiful, bright, cheery. Great job as always, good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your feedback Misty. PM
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune, Sunny Days Are Here Again, has the right set up and gives us a visual of the calm skies that may have eluded us generally or the harsh times that have subsided. Nice.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This lune, Sunny Days Are Here Again, has the right set up and gives us a visual of the calm skies that may have eluded us generally or the harsh times that have subsided. Nice.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your feedback, Bill. PM
Comment from Sasha
Terrific wok with this Lune entry. Beautifully written and I love the vivid imagery it creates. I hate to sound like a broken record but I continue to be amazed at how much can be said with so few syllables. I wish you all the best in this contest too.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Terrific wok with this Lune entry. Beautifully written and I love the vivid imagery it creates. I hate to sound like a broken record but I continue to be amazed at how much can be said with so few syllables. I wish you all the best in this contest too.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your feedback and your kind words. PM
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Thank you so much for your feedback and your kind words. PM
Comment from nbonner
I never really thought about clouds that way, they actually do look like white cotton candy if you think about it. We always used to try and guess the image they look like when we were kids (I secretly still do it to this day). This poem was a lot of fun to read. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest N.B
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I never really thought about clouds that way, they actually do look like white cotton candy if you think about it. We always used to try and guess the image they look like when we were kids (I secretly still do it to this day). This poem was a lot of fun to read. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest N.B
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments and feedback. PM
Comment from apky
You know, what I marvel at most is this gift, this talent you have for using a 3-2-3 to say so much. Maybe you could teach me about such marvellous poem forms. Reading this was a joy. Feasting my eyes on the photograph was rejuvinating.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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You know, what I marvel at most is this gift, this talent you have for using a 3-2-3 to say so much. Maybe you could teach me about such marvellous poem forms. Reading this was a joy. Feasting my eyes on the photograph was rejuvinating.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments. Your feedback is greatly appreciated. I think my talent may lie in this area because I don't have to get too hung up on grammar which apparently is my downfall.
Actually when I'm listening to any form of media, TV, Radio, CD's etc I hear a word or a phrase that sounds great and I write it down in my massive notebook ( full of stuff I'll never post). Then one day I open the page and it's staring at me and it clicks. Bless. PM
Comment from patcelaw
PM, this is a lovely worded 5-3-5 lune for the contest. Best wish in the contest. I do hope you will have a wonder filled day of great blessings, Take care my friend and feel well. Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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PM, this is a lovely worded 5-3-5 lune for the contest. Best wish in the contest. I do hope you will have a wonder filled day of great blessings, Take care my friend and feel well. Patricia
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review. Bless. PM
Comment from Sankey
Great lesson in poem forms. I enjoyed reading this. Payout and the chosen picture went right with it too. No spaga at all. Now all to do is get this line filled up haha, good work.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Great lesson in poem forms. I enjoyed reading this. Payout and the chosen picture went right with it too. No spaga at all. Now all to do is get this line filled up haha, good work.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Lol I find that a lot. Choose the word or phrase that you most liked and comment on it. It gets me to 150 when I'm stuck! PM
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layout sorry not payout duh! Good idea on filling up reviews hehe.