Harbingers
lune-contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune, Harbinger, has the correct set up and leaves me with the idea that an eclipse is something natural and not the beginning of the end of civilization (or am I asking to much).
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This lune, Harbinger, has the correct set up and leaves me with the idea that an eclipse is something natural and not the beginning of the end of civilization (or am I asking to much).
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Very creative and clever Lune poem and I particularly love the reference to the wink of the moon. Good luck in the contest,,
cheers.
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Very creative and clever Lune poem and I particularly love the reference to the wink of the moon. Good luck in the contest,,
cheers.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is brilliant, Mikey. I take it the moon's wink is something to do with the recent eclipse, or maybe not? Anyway I thought it was very cleverly worded. Best wishes for the contest, The humour is subtle and very sweet, Giddy :))
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This is brilliant, Mikey. I take it the moon's wink is something to do with the recent eclipse, or maybe not? Anyway I thought it was very cleverly worded. Best wishes for the contest, The humour is subtle and very sweet, Giddy :))
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
Comment from frierajac
Thank you for the informative post, the detail on the creator of the form. I like the word sojourne as associated here with the word moon. they seem to sound
together, as though related in some looney way.
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Thank you for the informative post, the detail on the creator of the form. I like the word sojourne as associated here with the word moon. they seem to sound
together, as though related in some looney way.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used the correct amount of syllables, very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest my friend! Teri
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This is a very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used the correct amount of syllables, very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest my friend! Teri
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Aw, oh so cute Mav. The moon is winking at the earth again. Luckily it joins in. Speaking of joining I just put the hat in the ring for your contest here. Hopefully the syllable count doesn't tax me tooooooo much.
Great job with this and best of luck with your contest.
Ange
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Aw, oh so cute Mav. The moon is winking at the earth again. Luckily it joins in. Speaking of joining I just put the hat in the ring for your contest here. Hopefully the syllable count doesn't tax me tooooooo much.
Great job with this and best of luck with your contest.
Ange
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
Ah, yes, just a peaceful little rest, she has caused way too many scenes lately. I love your little Lune, great picture, a delightful entry for this contest! Blessings...
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Ah, yes, just a peaceful little rest, she has caused way too many scenes lately. I love your little Lune, great picture, a delightful entry for this contest! Blessings...
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
You really have a knack for these. It seems like you always come up with the most clever and mind blowing little thoughts. Love this. How can it lose. NG
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You really have a knack for these. It seems like you always come up with the most clever and mind blowing little thoughts. Love this. How can it lose. NG
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
Comment from rspoet
Hello Michael,
A fine Lune poem for the contest
a slow wink from the moon, as a sign from the heavens,
we are all sojourners in this universe
the Earth included, for motion is the universal constant
oxymoronically speaking
The poet has freedom of choice in a Lune
Personally, I would make the font smaller
to reinforce the idea of the wink
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
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Hello Michael,
A fine Lune poem for the contest
a slow wink from the moon, as a sign from the heavens,
we are all sojourners in this universe
the Earth included, for motion is the universal constant
oxymoronically speaking
The poet has freedom of choice in a Lune
Personally, I would make the font smaller
to reinforce the idea of the wink
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune poem and great presentation. Syllable count is spot on, personification with the moon winking and giving you a sign. Good luck with the contest.
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A very well-written Lune poem and great presentation. Syllable count is spot on, personification with the moon winking and giving you a sign. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017