Bug in my Beer
Just a Silly Song on the 4th of July16 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
You is one lady after my heart, Kerry. Anyone that can share a cap of beer with a fly and does not swat it away is one to drink the river with. You got yourself a future country and western song all you need is the music. Thank you for sharing a delightful funny lyrical song. :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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You is one lady after my heart, Kerry. Anyone that can share a cap of beer with a fly and does not swat it away is one to drink the river with. You got yourself a future country and western song all you need is the music. Thank you for sharing a delightful funny lyrical song. :)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Awe... Thank you so much, that's so sweet of you. I appreciate your kindness.
Comment from robyn corum
Kerry,
You're right, this is a fun -- and funny -- poem. You know, they say it's not appropriate to drink alone... so this is a great way around that without having to introduce PEOPLE who might interrupt your mood. hahahaha!
Thanks for sharing!
But just one small note - you know that we are only supposed to 're-promote' old pieces and not duplicate them? If Tom finds this, you may be chastised...
Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Kerry,
You're right, this is a fun -- and funny -- poem. You know, they say it's not appropriate to drink alone... so this is a great way around that without having to introduce PEOPLE who might interrupt your mood. hahahaha!
Thanks for sharing!
But just one small note - you know that we are only supposed to 're-promote' old pieces and not duplicate them? If Tom finds this, you may be chastised...
Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thanks Robyn, I appreciate it. I did just re-promote it. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from JC Viper
I enjoyed a bug in my beer. I read it to my wife we both chuckled. Hope to see more of your work. Keep up the humor. I like humor the world is to serious. LOL.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I enjoyed a bug in my beer. I read it to my wife we both chuckled. Hope to see more of your work. Keep up the humor. I like humor the world is to serious. LOL.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much, my friend, I'm happy you both had a chuckle. I appreciate your kind comments. I see you're fairly new, Welcome to FanStory!
Comment from SueZen
I did sing it to my own country beat and danced haha ! Just down my street, spontaneous, humorous poems like this, such a LAUGH ! And must add, not a lie, often see bugs land in my glass of wine, first let them enjoy a bit of this alc'holic nectar, chat to them, but don't let them drown in delirium, rescue them, lift them out with index finger and watch them first in state of "shock" ? and then, obviously drunk, zigzagging on my finger and finally taking flight again hahaha...
LOVELY pic to add to laughter ! Thanks for sharing, great !
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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I did sing it to my own country beat and danced haha ! Just down my street, spontaneous, humorous poems like this, such a LAUGH ! And must add, not a lie, often see bugs land in my glass of wine, first let them enjoy a bit of this alc'holic nectar, chat to them, but don't let them drown in delirium, rescue them, lift them out with index finger and watch them first in state of "shock" ? and then, obviously drunk, zigzagging on my finger and finally taking flight again hahaha...
LOVELY pic to add to laughter ! Thanks for sharing, great !
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2017
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LOL, that's hilarious, Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Mistydawn
what a cute poem. A little silly but fun and what imagination. I can see this as a country song. It's up there with some of Ray Stevens songs and he made living writing funny jingles. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, take care.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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what a cute poem. A little silly but fun and what imagination. I can see this as a country song. It's up there with some of Ray Stevens songs and he made living writing funny jingles. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, take care.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Lol, thanks so much, Misty, I appreciate it.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Kerry
= This was a fun read.
= Can't go wrong with with country music.
= Cute artwork too, for a nice work.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Hi, Kerry
= This was a fun read.
= Can't go wrong with with country music.
= Cute artwork too, for a nice work.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend.
Comment from Rasmine
Kerry, :P
He said to me, "Ma'am, you're awfully kind.
See, a bug like me don't get treated this way.
Folks usually try to swat me away."
Just fill me a cap when you give a twist.
We'll get down tonight
and do somethin' like this."
The Little Bug started twirling right in the air.
I started dancin' and flippin' my hair.
This is great! Hope your Fourth of July was spectacular!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Kerry, :P
He said to me, "Ma'am, you're awfully kind.
See, a bug like me don't get treated this way.
Folks usually try to swat me away."
Just fill me a cap when you give a twist.
We'll get down tonight
and do somethin' like this."
The Little Bug started twirling right in the air.
I started dancin' and flippin' my hair.
This is great! Hope your Fourth of July was spectacular!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Rasmine, I appreciate it. Hope you had a great day as well:))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem. It is said that it is very dangerous to drink alone. I am glad you had a little bug to keep you company and makes you feel happy on the fourth of July. Lol.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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A very well-written fun poem. It is said that it is very dangerous to drink alone. I am glad you had a little bug to keep you company and makes you feel happy on the fourth of July. Lol.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Lol, thanks, Sandra, I had all my FS friends I spoke with all night too.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Can a bug get ticketed for flying drunk? Probably not because none of the other bugs would believe him when he told them he was drunk, right? Interesting and I liked the fun-ness of this
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Can a bug get ticketed for flying drunk? Probably not because none of the other bugs would believe him when he told them he was drunk, right? Interesting and I liked the fun-ness of this
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Lol, thanks so much. That's funny.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Haha ... this is cute and creative, Kerry. I especially loved "The little bug started twirling right in the air. I started dancin' and flippin' my hair". I the love the image you created with this! Thanks for making me smile! :) ~ ~ Connie
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Haha ... this is cute and creative, Kerry. I especially loved "The little bug started twirling right in the air. I started dancin' and flippin' my hair". I the love the image you created with this! Thanks for making me smile! :) ~ ~ Connie
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Your welcome, glad you had a laugh, thanks,Connie