Walk With Me.
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Forbidden space."From victim to survivor of abuse.
7 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
You have presented your tale with passion and feeling. Exposing the secrets you held as an innocent child. It is a sad story. You are a strong survivor. I'm glad you are getting it out. Shining a light. I hope it helps. I am sorry for your pain, but applaud your courage and tenacity. Very well written. IT IS MOST TOUCHING.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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You have presented your tale with passion and feeling. Exposing the secrets you held as an innocent child. It is a sad story. You are a strong survivor. I'm glad you are getting it out. Shining a light. I hope it helps. I am sorry for your pain, but applaud your courage and tenacity. Very well written. IT IS MOST TOUCHING.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Wow! six shining stars.
Thank you so much for your constant support and kind, thoughtful review.
It was actually posting my poems and stories on Fanstory from 2013 that
awakened my muse and gave me a voice and the ability to become the person
I knew I could, and should, be.
Comment from MaggieF
This was so hard to read. I'm so sorry, all children are entitled to a safe and happy childhood, unfortunately I know that isn't always the case. Your poem told your story very simply and eloquently. MaggieF
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This was so hard to read. I'm so sorry, all children are entitled to a safe and happy childhood, unfortunately I know that isn't always the case. Your poem told your story very simply and eloquently. MaggieF
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Thank you Maggie,
I appreciate your review and compassion.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks of a true story of a girl who had lived all her childhood days in diverse abuse in the family and she could not but to bear and cry and none help anyway; I liked.
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This speaks of a true story of a girl who had lived all her childhood days in diverse abuse in the family and she could not but to bear and cry and none help anyway; I liked.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Thank you for your kind, caring review.
It is much appreciated.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
OH I WISH I had a six to give you this is the best and rawest most moving poem I have seen in some time. Perhaps because I can relate but also the rhyming scheme and pacing was flawless. Well done and keep on being a survivor good luck with your book love Meia x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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OH I WISH I had a six to give you this is the best and rawest most moving poem I have seen in some time. Perhaps because I can relate but also the rhyming scheme and pacing was flawless. Well done and keep on being a survivor good luck with your book love Meia x
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Thank you for your sentiments.
I appreciate your time.
:-) Shirley
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I think stories like this will eventually heal your broken heart and childhood fears Shirley. Iy is a shame children have to go through what you and your siblings endured.. God will have the final say it the mater. Love. Nancy.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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I think stories like this will eventually heal your broken heart and childhood fears Shirley. Iy is a shame children have to go through what you and your siblings endured.. God will have the final say it the mater. Love. Nancy.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Thank you Nancy.:-) Shirley
Comment from l.raven
HI Shirley, it is so sad when a father will abuse his own child...and even worse is a mother who won't protect her...I am so sorry...like you say...you put it away...but it still comes out at night...your story is very well written my sweet friend...but so very sad...love ya girl...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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HI Shirley, it is so sad when a father will abuse his own child...and even worse is a mother who won't protect her...I am so sorry...like you say...you put it away...but it still comes out at night...your story is very well written my sweet friend...but so very sad...love ya girl...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Thank you Linda.
I am so touched by your six star review.
Your understanding of my journey is appreciated.
I wasn't abused by my father but by my mother's defacto after my
mother and father separated.
:-) Shirley
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I'm so sorry...I'm so glad it wasn't your father...I read so many on here Shirley that have been abused...it is sooooo wrong...sigh...you are so welcome girl...xxoo love
Comment from lalajovanoski
Wow I really found this piece to be very full of depth and good measure it has a lot of good imagery and it flows very smoothly thank you so much for sharing this and God bless you
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Wow I really found this piece to be very full of depth and good measure it has a lot of good imagery and it flows very smoothly thank you so much for sharing this and God bless you
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and review.
:-) Shirley