Just Like Me From Aa to Zz
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4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Ha, ha. You've got that right. Kids are usually messy and noisy. You've depicted this well. Congratulations for placing in the contest. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Ha, ha. You've got that right. Kids are usually messy and noisy. You've depicted this well. Congratulations for placing in the contest. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thanks Marilyn, and you are right about the boys. The girls get that way when they hit their teen years ;) I just keep pecking away at this alphabet thing and pretty soon . . . - Wendy
Comment from LoannaLois
What a wonderfully rhymed and written poem. Everything about it, especially the wonderful words used,is just so cute and perfect for a child's reading and listening.
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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What a wonderfully rhymed and written poem. Everything about it, especially the wonderful words used,is just so cute and perfect for a child's reading and listening.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Thanks for the kind words LoannaLois. I changed Shhhh to the real title, Karli Kenol, since the contest has ended, I didn't want the folks who have been reading the other book chapters to guess it was mine. I am glad you liked it. - Wendy
Comment from RodG
This is a delightful poem about a noisy child. I definitely think it will appeal to young MALE readers who will see themselves as Karli Kenol. I especially like your many examples of how/why he is noisy and your occasional use of onomatopoeia.
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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This is a delightful poem about a noisy child. I definitely think it will appeal to young MALE readers who will see themselves as Karli Kenol. I especially like your many examples of how/why he is noisy and your occasional use of onomatopoeia.
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Thanks for the read and review, Rod. I changed Shhhh to the real title, Karli Kenol, since the contest has ended, I didn't want the folks who have been reading the other book chapters to guess it was mine. I am glad you liked it. - Wendy
Comment from zanya
Yes all that wonderful, youthful energy and curiousity properly celebrated here with lots of 'buzzing,booming, howls and hoots'- a fun read with a great visual
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Yes all that wonderful, youthful energy and curiousity properly celebrated here with lots of 'buzzing,booming, howls and hoots'- a fun read with a great visual
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Thanks for the kind words and the sixth Zanya. I changed Shhhh to the real title, Karli Kenol, since the contest has ended, I didn't want the folks who have been reading the other book chapters to guess it was mine. Thanks for the encouragement. - Wendy