Comment from alf collier

Excellent

Applause!!! One cannot help but smile for as we read, we find the subliminal messages for children in each write!!! Another great write, my friend!!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thank you Alf. I am having such fun playing with these kids and will be quite sad when I run out of alphabet. Of course I could start on prime numbers and keep going for a while. - Wendy

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Lots of L's and S's in this great little poem about Lakeesha Little. You're creating some wonderful names for your book Wendy. I love this one, and it finishes off with a really positive message, and leaves my lips smiling.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thank you Valda. Your review made me smile too. - Wendy

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Virtual six for this adorable write, Wendy! What a terrific children's poem this is! I especially love your second stanza with the first word in every line being "Some". It just emphasizes that people are all different, and that's OK. "Cupid bows/never close" ... really cute! Great job on this write, Wendy! Luv it! - - Connie

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks Connie, I patterned her after my grand daughter who once told me her lips were to big and I said for what? Smiling? Kissing? I'm sure someone at school gave her a bad time. I did tell her that they really didn't look pretty when she pouted but other than that . . . Wendy

reply by bichonfrisegirl on 29-Apr-2017

Don't you just love it when the grandkids say something that gives you an idea for a great write? We as adults would never think to write about lips being big. LOL Out of the mouths of babes.

Wishing you a wonderful weekend, Wendy!

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Well, I am just LOL! This is so darn cute. Still giggling. Yes, we love our lips. I think this is the best one yet. Rhyming and artwork are so charming. Flows along nicely and is funny. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks Marilyn. I patterned this after my grand daughter who was worried hers were too big. Her hair is, but not her lips. ;)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

AAAWWW i like this one best. It is fun to read and say and it rhymes so pleasantly and easy to read. It also carries a message of smiling...makes all lips perfect

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Well, Barb, your review made me smile too. - Wendy

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh I am out of 6 but this deserves one my friend it is beautifully written with excellent rhyming reads smoothly the children will love it well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for smiling along with Lakeesha. Wendy

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

If I hadn't used my last six days ago, this would have got one for sure. Great rhyme, great meter, good use of enjambment. And the message is such an important one - and not just for kids. Great job, Wendy, thanks for sharing. Craig.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for the big smile for me with your wished for six. Good enough that you thought it was good enough. - Wendy

Comment from joeruptak

Exceptional

I am a 88-year-old kid who really got a kick out of this
poem
I am not quite into my second childhood and I am not senile
I just enjoyed this because it was so much of a change from
all of the other postings that I have read
I did enioy

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my work. I am having fun with these kids and hope to complete the alphabet soon. I'm so glad you liked it and appreciate the sixth. It helps me stay energized. - Wendy

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Kinda makes you wonder if sweet little Lakeesha Little was the love child of either the Rolling Stones Mick Jagger, or Aerosmith's Steven Tyler, Wendy.
Kids outta love this poem, however.
Cute...

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Glad I could give lip service to the self-esteem crowd. I'm glad you thought it was cute. - Wendy

Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

This children's poem has nice flow. The message is something everyone needs. The rhyme and rhythm are great. Thanks for sharing this piece of poetry on an important subject.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

I'm glad you enjoyed both the poem and the message. I think kids tend to be as tough on themselves as other kids are to them.. Maybe the book will help. - Wendy