Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Aw, what a cute picture, Bill. They both look like they're relaxing into some serious rest time after some play.

I much enjoyed reading and the photograph. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thanks, Gloria.

Comment from Loredana

Excellent

A sweet and descriptive poem about love. The image says it all and strengthen the love shown through the words you chose to describe the end of a playful day.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thanks, Loredana

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

They both look so comfortable, especially Emily. These moment are so fleeting. Treasure this poem, this moment and your sweet poem, you should make a copy for both of them.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thanks, D and V

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is such a cute poem and the art work is fun too, Emily is comfortable using her Dad as a bed and she is keeping Dad warm too! Best regards Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice poem about your son and your little granddaughter, Emily. Very good descriptive wording. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it and seeing some of your family! Teri

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

This is a priceless photo. I have resembled this photo from time to time as one of my children or grandchildren have found a similar spot on my chest to rest. LOL.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thanks, nomi

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A nice poem. The picture is hilarious. Are you sure Adam is alive. he looks like a bearskin rug. Or maybe a bear out for the winter.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thanks, Thomas. He's a friendly giant.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

The story in the little poem is enhanced by the photo. It is always so funny to watch a child go to sleep - they simply relax and close their eyes! Thank you for sharing this wonderful free verse,
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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thanks, Patty

Comment from fafa

Excellent

It expires with the premise of the poems with this style and has very good image accompanying, congratulations and very happy day

 

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thanks, fafa

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

What a classic picture! Perfectly described in your words. I'll be grandpa never does that! LOL
Nice little internal rhyme in the last line gives this one a satisfying ending.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017

Thanks, Tony