Moondream
Free Verse36 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
You have such a wide and beautiful imagination. It is good when such is unleashed for the love of the quill and not by design.
Once again, here, we see the extent of this.
Good imagery and tales of such we never tire.
Best wishes.
RGstar
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You have such a wide and beautiful imagination. It is good when such is unleashed for the love of the quill and not by design.
Once again, here, we see the extent of this.
Good imagery and tales of such we never tire.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
Comment from Drew Delaney
Lovely imagery in this one, Luna. You are a talented lady, and I'm so happy you manage to dream big. Your words are well chosen. Sun nods at rising moon - Nice! Speaking of Understanding is extremely my thing. Nice job! Drew xx
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Lovely imagery in this one, Luna. You are a talented lady, and I'm so happy you manage to dream big. Your words are well chosen. Sun nods at rising moon - Nice! Speaking of Understanding is extremely my thing. Nice job! Drew xx
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
Comment from SweetStreet00
After reading your bio on your profile, I was able to see this poem in a new light. As someone who has also lost someone close to me, this poem is almost a sense of closure; that, somewhere along the line, it will be better and our loved ones will reach the 'Moondream'.
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After reading your bio on your profile, I was able to see this poem in a new light. As someone who has also lost someone close to me, this poem is almost a sense of closure; that, somewhere along the line, it will be better and our loved ones will reach the 'Moondream'.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
Comment from Gianinas
I enjoyed the beautiful philosophical poem. My favorite lines were the description of the different emotions:
"Understanding nods ~ her gift is that of Empathy.
Freedom from Judgment smiles ~ his gift is Acceptance of All.
Attentiveness stretches out her hands ~ Listening to another is her gift.
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I enjoyed the beautiful philosophical poem. My favorite lines were the description of the different emotions:
"Understanding nods ~ her gift is that of Empathy.
Freedom from Judgment smiles ~ his gift is Acceptance of All.
Attentiveness stretches out her hands ~ Listening to another is her gift.
"
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
Comment from angel123
I like your well-written poem. I also like how you mentioned that the sun nods at the moon and the moon smiles at the rising sun. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.
angel123
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I like your well-written poem. I also like how you mentioned that the sun nods at the moon and the moon smiles at the rising sun. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.
angel123
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
Comment from johnwilson
This is a beautiful piece filled with immense hope, dreams and fantasy! Sometimes, half-asleep, half-awake, these kinds of dreams are pure ecstasy! You have done such a wonderful piece incorporating your feelings into a phantasmagorical ride! The artwork paints the poem with such a wonderful visual of the cloud---the king of fantasy for me!
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This is a beautiful piece filled with immense hope, dreams and fantasy! Sometimes, half-asleep, half-awake, these kinds of dreams are pure ecstasy! You have done such a wonderful piece incorporating your feelings into a phantasmagorical ride! The artwork paints the poem with such a wonderful visual of the cloud---the king of fantasy for me!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
Comment from Ulla
Hi Luna, this is a wonderful world full of wonders and adventures. I loved the idea of riding a unicorn. That wonderful fictive animal. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Hi Luna, this is a wonderful world full of wonders and adventures. I loved the idea of riding a unicorn. That wonderful fictive animal. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
Comment from ronnie k
I am happy I am able to show what I feel, from the opening line my spirit took control, that wonderful, totally beautiful ride gave me such joy for it resounded in me the promise given by the FATHER, many thanks
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I am happy I am able to show what I feel, from the opening line my spirit took control, that wonderful, totally beautiful ride gave me such joy for it resounded in me the promise given by the FATHER, many thanks
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
Comment from dragonpoet
What a wonderful dream of the land of faerie and of a perfect world. I have alway wished to ride a unicorn. I wrote a poem called 'Pet of a Different Kind' long ago about having a unicorn for a pet.
Perfect artwork for this free verse poem that sadly brings us back to reality at the end.
Keep writing
Happy New Year.
Joan
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What a wonderful dream of the land of faerie and of a perfect world. I have alway wished to ride a unicorn. I wrote a poem called 'Pet of a Different Kind' long ago about having a unicorn for a pet.
Perfect artwork for this free verse poem that sadly brings us back to reality at the end.
Keep writing
Happy New Year.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
a world of creativity and passion.
This is the realm of the poet, musician,
artist, philosopher, and seer.
They present me with the gift of Inspiration.
A wonderful free verse. I especially like the lines above. Happy Holidays, my friend~Debbie
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a world of creativity and passion.
This is the realm of the poet, musician,
artist, philosopher, and seer.
They present me with the gift of Inspiration.
A wonderful free verse. I especially like the lines above. Happy Holidays, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016