Greyson - Acrostic
pics of happy time with family26 total reviews
Comment from Unspoken94
This is your favorite subject---Greyson. However,
as I was going through your portfolio, I noticed that
this piece needed one more review to get to the
highest level of recognition. Well, no longer. I hope
you don't mind. -Bill
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
This is your favorite subject---Greyson. However,
as I was going through your portfolio, I noticed that
this piece needed one more review to get to the
highest level of recognition. Well, no longer. I hope
you don't mind. -Bill
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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thank you
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a cute acrostic about your grandson. He sure is a cutie :)
My one thought is for acrostics I like to see the first letter in each line enlarged so we can see the word you're writing about. Also, I think it would be better to right justify it and keep that acrostic word even so it's easy to read. Centering is nice for other poetry styles.
This is a pay it forward review as started by I am Cat. I searched your portfolio to find a post that needs only one review to bump it up to blue ribbon or all time best status. This review should help you get to 25 reviews. However, I notice the all time best status doesn't get rewarded until 26 reviews most times. I don't know why. So I hope this review helps you.
Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
This is a cute acrostic about your grandson. He sure is a cutie :)
My one thought is for acrostics I like to see the first letter in each line enlarged so we can see the word you're writing about. Also, I think it would be better to right justify it and keep that acrostic word even so it's easy to read. Centering is nice for other poetry styles.
This is a pay it forward review as started by I am Cat. I searched your portfolio to find a post that needs only one review to bump it up to blue ribbon or all time best status. This review should help you get to 25 reviews. However, I notice the all time best status doesn't get rewarded until 26 reviews most times. I don't know why. So I hope this review helps you.
Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thank you so much Joy for your help! Some days I do ok and other when MS is acting up I do fair. Thanks for all the help! Blessings, Teri
Comment from BeasPeas
You are getting so good at posting the photos, Teri. Greyson surely is a cute little guy. It's fun to see him in various settings with family. I enjoyed reading about him. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
You are getting so good at posting the photos, Teri. Greyson surely is a cute little guy. It's fun to see him in various settings with family. I enjoyed reading about him. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much Marilyn! I am at a stand still today with my photos on here but if by the grace of God I can put another on here I will gladly do it! Thanks my friend! hugs, Teri
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great poem and a great little guy. I have eight Grandkids. Seven boys and one girl. Guess who gets spoiled... me. They are a blast. A lot more fun than their parents were.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
A great poem and a great little guy. I have eight Grandkids. Seven boys and one girl. Guess who gets spoiled... me. They are a blast. A lot more fun than their parents were.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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lol I do know that feeling with this little guy! They are great to be around. I think they help us stay younger! Teri
Comment from sandy montgomery
Nice poem
Adorable pictures. He is a cutie. Two year olds can be exhausting but what a blessing. Thank you for sharing your work and your family.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
Nice poem
Adorable pictures. He is a cutie. Two year olds can be exhausting but what a blessing. Thank you for sharing your work and your family.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much Sandy. It is a true blessing and I thank God every day for my life! Hugs, Teri
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are sweet, kind and inspirational. I liked
the warm dedication to family. The artwork is the best and compliments the
theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
Excellent Poem! The author's words are sweet, kind and inspirational. I liked
the warm dedication to family. The artwork is the best and compliments the
theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the great review! hugs, Teri
Comment from MizKat
Hi Teresa,
Your story is wonderful as always. It's nice to see pictures of your family. The lady with the white hair reminds me of my hair that is also white. I'm the oldest
in our family. Anyway back to you. I loved seeing the pictures and reading what you wrote.
Kat
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
Hi Teresa,
Your story is wonderful as always. It's nice to see pictures of your family. The lady with the white hair reminds me of my hair that is also white. I'm the oldest
in our family. Anyway back to you. I loved seeing the pictures and reading what you wrote.
Kat
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you my sweet friend! hugs, Teri
Comment from heyjude
Teri, I'm sure greyson is a sweet little boy. What a cutie. I know your Grandma heart is so attached to him. Keep sharing your thoughts about him
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
Teri, I'm sure greyson is a sweet little boy. What a cutie. I know your Grandma heart is so attached to him. Keep sharing your thoughts about him
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you my sweet friend! He is a very sweet little guy but can truly have those terrible two moments too! lol hugs, Teri
Comment from LIJ Red
A proud grandparent acrostic, and a well-written one at that. Time to savor each moment, for they grow so fast...excellent post, to my way of thinking.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
A proud grandparent acrostic, and a well-written one at that. Time to savor each moment, for they grow so fast...excellent post, to my way of thinking.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the great review! Teri
Comment from Bryana
Lovely family having a good time with
an adorable baby Thank you for posting
those beautiful pictures of the family.
Have a wonderful Sunday my friend.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
Lovely family having a good time with
an adorable baby Thank you for posting
those beautiful pictures of the family.
Have a wonderful Sunday my friend.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Thank you my sweet friend! Hugs, Teri