Fun At The Fairground
3-5-3 contest8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Your 3-5-3 brings back memories as it focuses on that intake of breath, the gasp, as we are spun around at the amusement park. Original and unique. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Your 3-5-3 brings back memories as it focuses on that intake of breath, the gasp, as we are spun around at the amusement park. Original and unique. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Comment from Muffins
Creative take on something I have wonderful memories of. Each sentence is an image of air in its most fun usage. God luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Creative take on something I have wonderful memories of. Each sentence is an image of air in its most fun usage. God luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Sudden gasp, pretty much says it all, bringing that feeling as we whirl so fast it almost takes our breath. So much fun at the fair. Great job and good luck! :-)
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Sudden gasp, pretty much says it all, bringing that feeling as we whirl so fast it almost takes our breath. So much fun at the fair. Great job and good luck! :-)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
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Comment from TPAC
Well spoken conveyance given by the writer, strong line structuring with defining items aspects. Writer takes reader on a joyous adventure at theme park. A good write.
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Well spoken conveyance given by the writer, strong line structuring with defining items aspects. Writer takes reader on a joyous adventure at theme park. A good write.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
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Comment from papa55mike
This very well written and I love the picture. I have ridden many of those rides and it usually doesn't end well. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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This very well written and I love the picture. I have ridden many of those rides and it usually doesn't end well. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
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Comment from William Ross
Good, nicely done on the 3.5.3 and the breeze prompt, winds from carnival rides. Great job and good thought, good luck on this and have a great day
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Good, nicely done on the 3.5.3 and the breeze prompt, winds from carnival rides. Great job and good thought, good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
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Comment from LisaD123
This is a clever interpretation of the prompt. The reader can easily feel the wind that's created from moving at speed at height. Good luck for the contest!
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This is a clever interpretation of the prompt. The reader can easily feel the wind that's created from moving at speed at height. Good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
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Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
Most can remember that sudden gasp
of fun, fear, delight or fright
as the ride picks up speed and doesn't stop
Well done with a good picture to match
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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This is a fine entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
Most can remember that sudden gasp
of fun, fear, delight or fright
as the ride picks up speed and doesn't stop
Well done with a good picture to match
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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