Wally Weasel's Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Wally Weasel Paints the Beach"He's not choosy about what he paints.
19 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really lovely! I love the imagery of the waves touching his tootsies, lol, and his elbows fly with his brushes on the canvas. It's such a lovely scene. I think this book would do so well. Love it!!! :)) Sandra xxxx
I've sent you an invite to join the Women Poets. I hope you join, we need more poems and you have some lovely ones. I'm going to have my dinner now but will read more about Wally later. He's so cute!! Love and hugs, my dear, talented sister. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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That was really lovely! I love the imagery of the waves touching his tootsies, lol, and his elbows fly with his brushes on the canvas. It's such a lovely scene. I think this book would do so well. Love it!!! :)) Sandra xxxx
I've sent you an invite to join the Women Poets. I hope you join, we need more poems and you have some lovely ones. I'm going to have my dinner now but will read more about Wally later. He's so cute!! Love and hugs, my dear, talented sister. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I'd love to join the Women Poets. I'm honored that you asked. I haven't received the link yet.
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I'm not sure if you get a message on Facebook, or you get an email. Check both. Let me know if you haven't received it and I'll send the invite again. xxx
I'll chat to you about publishing your book next week. xxxx
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Okey-dokey.
Comment from MelB
Good aabb rhyme, rhythm, and flow. I enjoy the sunset and the beach. I enjoyed reading about Wally painting at the beach.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Good aabb rhyme, rhythm, and flow. I enjoy the sunset and the beach. I enjoyed reading about Wally painting at the beach.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Wally is going to branch out soon and do many things. He might even take art lessons. LOL
Thank you. 8-)
Comment from tony bronk
I believe that this will be my last light poem that I will review, but there seems to be an epidemic of light poetry since I came back to Fanstory, so I'm having a hard time finding anything serious. Have a happy dayTony
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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I believe that this will be my last light poem that I will review, but there seems to be an epidemic of light poetry since I came back to Fanstory, so I'm having a hard time finding anything serious. Have a happy dayTony
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Thank you for reviewing mine. I appreciate it very much.
I feel just the opposite. I find there is so much despair and gloom written here. I thought something for children would be a nice change.
Thank you for reading mine. 8-)
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I apologize for being bitter toward you. You are correct; your poem for children is nice, and "should" be written". There has to be a ying and a yang, and you sound like a very sweet "yang" Forgive me, Madam. Tony
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Oh, no! I didn't think you were bitter. I'm sorry if I gave that impression. I just meant that I find so much sadness written on this site. Also, I was flattered that you chose mine to read. Please don't feel the need to apologize. Thank you for the compliment. You're so kind. 8-)
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As you, too! Tony
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Oh, no! I didn't think you were bitter. I'm sorry if I gave that impression. I just meant that I find so much sadness written on this site. Also, I was flattered that you chose mine to read. Please don't feel the need to apologize. Thank you for the compliment. You're so kind. 8-)
Comment from John Parkin
I loved the story and the flow from one line to the next. It tied together nicely and I can relate. I work with Special Needs people and we have many Wally's in art class every day and that is what makes the day so rewarding. Sometimes masterpieces come from the most mundane looking works of art.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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I loved the story and the flow from one line to the next. It tied together nicely and I can relate. I work with Special Needs people and we have many Wally's in art class every day and that is what makes the day so rewarding. Sometimes masterpieces come from the most mundane looking works of art.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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So true about masterpieces from the mundane. It's so good of you work with these people.
I can't tell you how much I appreciate your lovely review and the six stars! I'm very flattered, and so happy you like Wally.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. 8-)
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Your welcome.
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Your welcome.
Comment from Lancer1979
You know I always look forward to reading about what Wally is up to. Reading these stories helps me to find my childhood because I don't recall ever having someone read to me except at school. Well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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You know I always look forward to reading about what Wally is up to. Reading these stories helps me to find my childhood because I don't recall ever having someone read to me except at school. Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016
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Thank YOU for being so supportive. I realize sooner or later Wally is going to be put to rest. Maybe one or two more at the most.
I appreciate how you always make me feel so good about my work. Bless you! 8-)
Comment from Chris Walker
Wally has been a busy and creative artist. This is a sweet one you've written about Wally painting by the sea. Great imagery- hot sand on his little feet, waves washed in and out with such a lulling beat--lovely! I really enjoyed,Chris
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Wally has been a busy and creative artist. This is a sweet one you've written about Wally painting by the sea. Great imagery- hot sand on his little feet, waves washed in and out with such a lulling beat--lovely! I really enjoyed,Chris
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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I'm so glad. Your lovely review has made me very happy. Thank you. 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Wally is very talented and he painted a beautiful sunset on the beach. He is proud of his artistic handy work. He did all of it in one afternoon.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Wally is very talented and he painted a beautiful sunset on the beach. He is proud of his artistic handy work. He did all of it in one afternoon.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Yes, he really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor.
Thank you for your review and for your support. I do so much appreciate it. 8-)
Comment from MizKat
Hi DaMommy,
I just love reading about Wally. He's so darn cute and such a talented painter. I wish I go paint as well as he does. I painted for a few years then quit. I sometimes use my own paintings with my work.
Kat
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Hi DaMommy,
I just love reading about Wally. He's so darn cute and such a talented painter. I wish I go paint as well as he does. I painted for a few years then quit. I sometimes use my own paintings with my work.
Kat
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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It's wonderful you can use your own paintings. I painted several years back, but don't anymore.
He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor.
I'm so happy you like Wally. He's a sweet little guy. 8-)
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It was years ago when I painted too. Every once in awhile I might use one of them. Yes, Wally sure is wonderful.
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You should. I'd love to see you do it. 8-)
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What? Put up some of my own paintings?
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Yes, why not?
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A lot of the time I forget what people have said in their notes. It's the reason I have to ask questions. What do you mean by "yes, why not?" Kat
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Why not use your own paintings in your writing? I think that would be great! 8-)
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I would have to write something that the picture would go with. I may try it again, one of these days. LOL Kat
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You should. I'd love to see you do it. 8-)
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Yes, why not?
Comment from AnnaLinda
Yvonne,
Oh dear...This is so precious! I loved every bit of your adorable poem.
Now I know Wally and I have something in common...our love for the
beach.
I can't even point out a particular line that I liked, because I loved them
all! This has a great flow and rhymes...action with elbows flying and all.
Wow, he's really creative and he does not hold back!!
Well, let me your first reviewer to mention that amazing sunset scene on
his easel that SweetLinda offered...lol Very nice how you put it there
on his weasel easel.
Super duper poem!
Linda
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Yvonne,
Oh dear...This is so precious! I loved every bit of your adorable poem.
Now I know Wally and I have something in common...our love for the
beach.
I can't even point out a particular line that I liked, because I loved them
all! This has a great flow and rhymes...action with elbows flying and all.
Wow, he's really creative and he does not hold back!!
Well, let me your first reviewer to mention that amazing sunset scene on
his easel that SweetLinda offered...lol Very nice how you put it there
on his weasel easel.
Super duper poem!
Linda
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Thank you for a most wonderful review. Wally appreciates the recognition.
He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor.
I think the painting made the picture.
Thank you.
April 18 is now officially Weasel Day!
Comment from Douglas Paul
Outstanding. I just love these poems. The tempo is superb in this one. The imagery is strong. Wally is just a delightful character. Good one, Yvonne
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Outstanding. I just love these poems. The tempo is superb in this one. The imagery is strong. Wally is just a delightful character. Good one, Yvonne
Comment Written 18-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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He really puts his all in his painting. I have to see that he keeps one foot on the floor.
Thank you for a lovely, lovely review. I appreciate it so much. 8-)