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Wally Weasel's Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Wally Paints His Neighborhood"
He's not choosy about what he paints.

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Wonderful!! I love that the children will learn of lots of different colours and that he enjoys what he does. That is the key, if you enjoy it, it doesn't matter what it turns out like. I loved this one, too!! Definitely a book!!! :)) Love and hugs, dear sister! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Chris Walker
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Another Wally Weasel gem! These really are quite wonderful and they would be a delight to many kiddos. I'm sure you been nudge before--you could most definitely publish these. Excellent and well written. Again, I love all the colors you sprinkle like glitter in these poems. Chris

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016
    I appreciate you saying that. Thank you so much. 8-)
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
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I see Wally is at it again. I understand the joy he received from his paintings. Until recently when some health issues have rained down on me, writing poetry was the one thing that created my happy times. So I can feel Wally's joy in painting houses of every color.

Very well thought out and very well written my friend.

Take care!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
    I'm so happy you like it, and you can feel Wally's joy. That warms my heart.

    Thank you so much. 8-)
Comment from MelB
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You have such a wonderful talent for writing children's poetry. This tale of Wally painting is wonderfully written. If it brings him happiness, he should keep doing it!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
    I think so, too. Thank you. You're always so sweet. 8-)
Comment from Word Junkie
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Hello damommy,

This is cute. For a moment there I thought Wally was painting the houses themselves, and that would have been funny, but it would have taken a lot of paint, too. To get that much paint he'd have to rob a bank, and it would have been difficult to work that in. ;)

This is original and and entertaining read.

Thanks for sharing, and I wish you well,
Lana

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
    Yes, it did sound that way. And I don't see Wally robbing a bank. LOL

    Thank you for a very nice review. I appreciate your comments. 8-)
Comment from Lancer1979
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Thank you my dear friend, who I will more than likely never meet face to face, but your words always put a smile on my face, encourage me, and bring comfort when I most need it, to my heart.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
    You make me so happy knowing I've made you happy. Thank you, dear friend.

    Who knows? We may meet someday. Wouldn't that be nice?

reply by Lancer1979 on 14-Apr-2016
    You're welcome! Indeed it would. Just know that your writings put a smile on my face every time I read.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
    You're a good friend. Your comments make me happy, too. 8-)
reply by Lancer1979 on 14-Apr-2016
    I speak the truth
reply by Anonymous Member on 16-Apr-2016
    You're a good friend. Your comments make me happy, too. 8-)
Comment from Kassa-Leigh
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This was such a cute poem, my friend! It is perfect for the little ones . . . even big ones like me! I enjoyed it very much.
Cheryl-Lynette

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
    Thank you for a very generous review. I appreciate it so much. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. 8-)
Comment from Teri7
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This was just too cute. I can see little Walley just painting up a storm. You have used very good descriptive words and great imagery. It was a joy to read and to review. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Thanks so much. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it. 8-)
Comment from C.J. 16
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A very good children's story. It is entertaining and humorous, and I'm sure kids would enjoy reading it or listening to it read aloud. Nicely done. All the best.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Thank you. I appreciate your review. 8-)
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Yvonne,

This is so cute! "Wally loves his painting" I see that! Look at that square thing there! You are too funny! This is very clever and fun and it is a great teaching
tool for young ones. Gee, he even cleans up his brush and stuff.

That's a lot of words there that you were able to keep at a good smooth pace
with nice rhymes and good energy. Very colorful and creative...Now it looks like he needs a bath.

My favorite stanza:

"There was paint on canvas, paint on Wally, most was on the ground,
and still he painted on until no bare spot could be found.
Looking o'er his shoulder, there was such a bright array
of colors never seen before, not even to this day."

I wish I could have seen that never before seen color!

Linda

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    It was something! A mixture of all his paints run together. He may have invented a new color. LOL

    Thank you for always being so sweet and supporting. I appreciate your comments always. 8-)