Comment from snowhood

Excellent

Well I see the sense of humor you must pass on. Loved the actual take on what should be said and fhe manner of it. I bet your spell check hated it, I loved it.
Thanks

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Yep, my spellcheck hates JJJ. More of his adventures are available in my portfolio if you're interested. He's so much fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your use of vernacular and the parallel sketch. Your rhymed couplets and cadence were appealing. Here's to them cowboys! -Joan

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Liilia

Exceptional

Oh, that tale is a hoot. You really nailed this with a flow of colorful expressions and kept the suspense going. Also thanks for using my drawing to illustrate.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016

Thanks for the six! And thanks for the awesome drawing that went perfectly with the poem. There's more of JJJ in my portfolio if you're interested.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this well done poem. You kept it going all the way through. Interesting, flows and rhymes well. Artwork is perfect for your words. Marilyn

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Yep that's a real cowboy. His English is just how I imagined it would be. Great story telling in a poem. You captured his nature, his speech and his demeanor. Thank you. it was a fun read.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from babyross

Excellent

I am seriously laughing out loud! What a way to wind down an evening than with a western poem! I love western movies too. The title was crazy enough, but the write was hilarious! Great job and glad you were a thinkin!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Thanks! I'm glad you had so much fun with my little western poem.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Cindy, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, great use of alternative speech helped this well written story along, good rhyming and rhythm added to a smooth flow of words, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Thanks. So glad you liked it.

reply by Eric1 on 01-Apr-2016

You are very welcome my friend.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Great art work and great words for this poem

Great cowboy story that happened in the old days

The rhyming was excellent and a very good poem and story to share.

Honey tree.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Cindy:

I like how this poem ended because I feared that JJJ was going to kill
ole Rusty - not that he be not deserving it. It is good to see JJJ is
going to let justice take its course.

enjoyed this a lot
good luck in the contest
jan

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

Thanks. JJJ never kills anyone. I like to keep his adventures suitable for the grandkids to read. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from poetsteve15

Exceptional

Who does not like a good old cowboy story. I sure do. I could see Marty Robins doing a song with this. Great Job you picked a picture that when well with it. what more can we ask for? GB Keep up good work.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

Thanks! Wouldn't it be great if someone made a song out of it? Glad you enjoyed it so much.

reply by poetsteve15 on 30-Mar-2016

it was great GB

reply by Anonymous Member on 02-Apr-2016

it was great GB