Fear the Demon Inside
Look who's talking20 total reviews
Comment from write hand blue
An appropriate picture picked out in red, with matching text.
A well written, flowing poem, told first person by a woman who must be a nympho.
The rules are to make it hot, and this is. Good luck.
:) Mel.
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An appropriate picture picked out in red, with matching text.
A well written, flowing poem, told first person by a woman who must be a nympho.
The rules are to make it hot, and this is. Good luck.
:) Mel.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
Comment from I am Cat
LOL, I love the disclaimer at the end...
;)
and the ... 'or should I say, your 'ex'?' lol
this 'swinging' attitude... I think it's quite prevalent
and so shall really get some votes. ;)
I almost got lost a few times..
and why not, there were a couple too many people
in the room for me! LOLOL
(but then, that was the point, right? )
well done! ;)
Good luck in the contest!
Cat
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LOL, I love the disclaimer at the end...
;)
and the ... 'or should I say, your 'ex'?' lol
this 'swinging' attitude... I think it's quite prevalent
and so shall really get some votes. ;)
I almost got lost a few times..
and why not, there were a couple too many people
in the room for me! LOLOL
(but then, that was the point, right? )
well done! ;)
Good luck in the contest!
Cat
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
Comment from BeasPeas
What I find most refreshing about your poem is that it points to something not talked about much and that is that men aren't the only ones who have physical desire. Your poem is definitely "hot." Provocative, interesting, and a very worthy poem for the content.
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What I find most refreshing about your poem is that it points to something not talked about much and that is that men aren't the only ones who have physical desire. Your poem is definitely "hot." Provocative, interesting, and a very worthy poem for the content.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hey Lance, This writing challenge is a hoot - all the closet smut writers are coming out, LOL.
This has a lot of ick factor, which is probably want you wanted. Good grief - I just read the prompt. I wonder who started this competition, LOL. Hugs, Lou
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Hey Lance, This writing challenge is a hoot - all the closet smut writers are coming out, LOL.
This has a lot of ick factor, which is probably want you wanted. Good grief - I just read the prompt. I wonder who started this competition, LOL. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
Comment from Domino 2
Hi, Lancellot.
1st line - do you mean, 'MY legs', as the rest is written in 1st person? Oh, hang on - I just read it again, and it's the guy talking, and 'him' refers to his penis'
Though I understand, I still got a bit confused with the mix of 'me/her/him'. Maybe I'm just having a 'blonde' morning. :-)
Anyway, an excellent depiction of the 'whore' who may be either a prostitute or a nympho maniac, or both which would make her job more satisfying - excuse the pun. ;-)
Excellent entry on the theme required.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
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Hi, Lancellot.
1st line - do you mean, 'MY legs', as the rest is written in 1st person? Oh, hang on - I just read it again, and it's the guy talking, and 'him' refers to his penis'
Though I understand, I still got a bit confused with the mix of 'me/her/him'. Maybe I'm just having a 'blonde' morning. :-)
Anyway, an excellent depiction of the 'whore' who may be either a prostitute or a nympho maniac, or both which would make her job more satisfying - excuse the pun. ;-)
Excellent entry on the theme required.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
I like the art work, the colors. The picture, I thought it was a man, is it? Nice rhyme and flow of the poem. Good job!
~gypsy
think i am something [ to ] bad to touch? (too)
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Hello,
I like the art work, the colors. The picture, I thought it was a man, is it? Nice rhyme and flow of the poem. Good job!
~gypsy
think i am something [ to ] bad to touch? (too)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
Comment from Leineco
Well! If you're gonna go there. . .go with gusto!
The view from the id. . .the hungry little carnal demon we usual keep on a leash.
And you. . .you set it free. . .Run amuk!
engorging the imagination
Hot, Hot, Hot!
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Well! If you're gonna go there. . .go with gusto!
The view from the id. . .the hungry little carnal demon we usual keep on a leash.
And you. . .you set it free. . .Run amuk!
engorging the imagination
Hot, Hot, Hot!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
Comment from justafan
Oh, sugga I can see why you wanted this contest...wow!!! You needed to release this bitchin work of art!!! Man oh man, this is flamin hot! Well done!!!
I shoulda stayed home...lol
Always justafan,
Missy
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Oh, sugga I can see why you wanted this contest...wow!!! You needed to release this bitchin work of art!!! Man oh man, this is flamin hot! Well done!!!
I shoulda stayed home...lol
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
Comment from Neonewman
Hot,hot,hot my friend! I love the theme this writing prompt has offered and the pieces that have been delivered.
Well crafted piece.
God bless!
Steve
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Hot,hot,hot my friend! I love the theme this writing prompt has offered and the pieces that have been delivered.
Well crafted piece.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
Comment from Sasha
Awesome work with this one. Definitely hot, actually boiling would be better. This is an terrific entry for this contest. You definitely deliver what the prompt asked for and then some. I wish you the all best in the contest.
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Awesome work with this one. Definitely hot, actually boiling would be better. This is an terrific entry for this contest. You definitely deliver what the prompt asked for and then some. I wish you the all best in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015