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Free Verse Poetry

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Why I Divorced a Writer

Ha,ha,ha,.... clever puny poem. Good use of poetry vocabulary and his annoying writer's repertoire. Good job!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2015

Comment from BeasPeas
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Cute and funny. Gave me a smile. Nothing like a "busman's holiday" to bring amusement. I think you did a good job with contest entry.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

Comment from seaglass
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Poor guy and he probably could help himself. This is a funny and clever poem using some BIG words coming to journalism. Actually, with a smooth lover, words don't matter.LOl

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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It certainly meets the contest requirements. Poor Will never had a chance for romance. Great use of so MANY writing tools. I wish you all the best in the voting (sorry Ron, but I do wish him the best LOL) and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

Comment from Joy Graham
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This is very punny and also funny :) I never would have used those words as you have, but I applaud you for making it all seem so natural. I think a divorce was the write thing to do lol! Good luck in this contest. I think you have a strong contender here!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015

Comment from Sis Cat
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This is a fun poem even though non of this is auto biographical . . . really. My father married and divorced a writer, so I found your poem resonated with me. I love your play on words and double entendres. Your choice of words are suggestive and open to the most lurid interpretation. Yes, that writer is so full of himself. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
    Yes he certainly is full of himself ... whoever he is...
    Fortunately, my wife pays no attention to me anymore. It's for the best. :)
    Glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Okay, Mikey. Is this true, or is it purely conjecture and speculation?
Okay, okay...I realize it's merely humor and not autobiographical in any way. After all, you're married to a woman (at least as far as we all know), and while it is now possible in many states to enter into a legal, binding same sex marriage these days, including the Great State of California, I understand that this is merely written tongue-in-cheek...so to speak.

Good luck in the contest. ~Dean ;}

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
    Total fiction. I have no idea who sat at my screen and wrote this nonsense or even what it means. Thanks for the marriage tips thought ... not that I need them of course ... friends, that's it, I have friends ........
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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This is an excellent poem entry for the contest - How Punny R U. I am so annoyed that I have no 6 left to give you. It is by far the best I've read yet. Very clever and both I and my husband laughed. Excellent. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
    I'm so delighted you both enjoyed it. My wife has grown weary of me. Ha!! Thanks for the well wishes. This was great FUN to write. :))
Comment from barkingdog
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lol
This is all very punny. What can I say, you really know how to give words a double meaning.
Best of luck in the contest, mystery poet.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
    Thanks. This was great fun to write. Glad you enjoyed!
Comment from nordicgirl
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LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!###!
OMG this just witty and hilarious. I don`t know if non writers would appreciate this, but WRITERS WULL!
A sure winner.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2015
    I'll cross my fingers. Thank you so much!!