Miscellaneous Poems - vol 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Fear of Flying"Yet more poems
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Comment from BeasPeas
Now this is clever and funny. Gave me a smile. I don't fly anymore for that very reason--I don't want to be up there all night.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Now this is clever and funny. Gave me a smile. I don't fly anymore for that very reason--I don't want to be up there all night.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Thank you, BeasPeas, for your very kind review. I'm glad my silly little limerick gave you a smile - mission accomplished!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with correct form. Poor Dwight is in for a crash landing. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with correct form. Poor Dwight is in for a crash landing. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Thank you for your kind remarks, Mystic Angel; they are very much appreciated.
Comment from RYME4U
This has the right rhythm for a limerick and it flows well. I like it and give it a five The subtle humor is well done. Good job!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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This has the right rhythm for a limerick and it flows well. I like it and give it a five The subtle humor is well done. Good job!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Thanks, RYME4U, for your positive review. Your comments are much appreciated.
Comment from I am Cat
LOL... Funny!
And not so much if you're Dwight!
you have the perfect rhythm for the Limerick
(one of my favorite forms)
(one of the ONLY forms I actually LOVE)
and your 1st, 2nd, and 5th lines rhyme.
your 3rd and 4th rhyme...
and the cadence is perfect!
and... one of the most important parts, it's FUNNY!
Well done and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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LOL... Funny!
And not so much if you're Dwight!
you have the perfect rhythm for the Limerick
(one of my favorite forms)
(one of the ONLY forms I actually LOVE)
and your 1st, 2nd, and 5th lines rhyme.
your 3rd and 4th rhyme...
and the cadence is perfect!
and... one of the most important parts, it's FUNNY!
Well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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I love limericks too :) Thanks for the very positive review, Cat. Much appreciated!
Comment from Nosha17
At least he was optimistic, he'd be lucky to still be up there, five minutes later! Good use of rhyming and humour to convey your witty thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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At least he was optimistic, he'd be lucky to still be up there, five minutes later! Good use of rhyming and humour to convey your witty thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you Faye for your generous review and good wishes.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
That is what he thinks! Won't be a very long night for him. Good touch of humor thrown into this well written limerick. Should be a good contest entry also. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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That is what he thinks! Won't be a very long night for him. Good touch of humor thrown into this well written limerick. Should be a good contest entry also. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you Brett for your kind remarks, they are much appreciated. Glad you liked it.