Aftermath
A Nonet/Acrostic9 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
There is ancient Jewish literature not appearing in the Bible as to how Cain was
able to leave home, get married, and build a city. Not with the children of Lilith, Adam's first wife, who became a very unpleasant night creature...just rambling.
Your acrostic is clear, precise, and excellent.
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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There is ancient Jewish literature not appearing in the Bible as to how Cain was
able to leave home, get married, and build a city. Not with the children of Lilith, Adam's first wife, who became a very unpleasant night creature...just rambling.
Your acrostic is clear, precise, and excellent.
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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My friend, I appreciate your stop and the wonderful insights, thank you very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Aftermath, does all the things a nonet should do AND is an acrostic as well. Along with this interesting graphic of hatred and literal back-stabbing, it all comes together.
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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This nonet, Aftermath, does all the things a nonet should do AND is an acrostic as well. Along with this interesting graphic of hatred and literal back-stabbing, it all comes together.
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Hello Bill, appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Funny, don't you think, that there was no hatred in this world until a woman was created and brought into the mix? Okay, okay, now don't getting yourself all worked up and in an uproar. I fully realize I speak primarily for myself, LOL. Besides, I have no way of knowing if the poet who authored this is a man, or a woman.
That being said, you make a very valid point here in your well written Nonet. I certainly wish you the very best of luck in the contest. ~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Funny, don't you think, that there was no hatred in this world until a woman was created and brought into the mix? Okay, okay, now don't getting yourself all worked up and in an uproar. I fully realize I speak primarily for myself, LOL. Besides, I have no way of knowing if the poet who authored this is a man, or a woman.
That being said, you make a very valid point here in your well written Nonet. I certainly wish you the very best of luck in the contest. ~Dean ;)
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Dean my friend, love your wit sir; appreciate the visit and the insights, thank you very much.
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It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
a good recounting of the Bible verse written in perfect nonet form. good luck to you in the contest.
~~~~~teresa~~~~~~
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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a good recounting of the Bible verse written in perfect nonet form. good luck to you in the contest.
~~~~~teresa~~~~~~
Comment Written 20-May-2015
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Hello Tab, thank you very much.
Comment from meggie13
Caine hated his brother Abel and killed him. This still goes on today, brothers killing brothers . Hate is another thing that goes on between family members and society in general . The picture used is perfect for your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Caine hated his brother Abel and killed him. This still goes on today, brothers killing brothers . Hate is another thing that goes on between family members and society in general . The picture used is perfect for your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Hello meggie13, I appreciate your visit and the insights, thank you very much.
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Comment from Janet7053
tells a story
Follows the nonet format
describes cause and effect
builds suspense
Has a one word profound conclusion Hate
This is interesting and I truly got something out of it.
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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tells a story
Follows the nonet format
describes cause and effect
builds suspense
Has a one word profound conclusion Hate
This is interesting and I truly got something out of it.
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Hello Janet, very kind of you to visit, love your wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from angel123
Excellent poem, well written, meaningful and thoughtful. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. It flows well and has a strong message.
Angel123
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Excellent poem, well written, meaningful and thoughtful. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. It flows well and has a strong message.
Angel123
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Hello Angel, I thank you for your wonderful review, glad you like the poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is very good. I like how the words after the first letter are so fitting with the story. I thought at first that the centering would cause a problem since this is an acrostic. However, the large, bold type keeps that from happening.
No change. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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This is very good. I like how the words after the first letter are so fitting with the story. I thought at first that the centering would cause a problem since this is an acrostic. However, the large, bold type keeps that from happening.
No change. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Hello jannypan, I appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the nonet, thank you very much.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi...
- This definitely deserves my last 'sixer!'
- Excellent entry for the prompt.
- Creative to not only give a lesson in your Nonet, you deliver in style in an Acrostic format, and presented effectively.
- Well done!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Hi...
- This definitely deserves my last 'sixer!'
- Excellent entry for the prompt.
- Creative to not only give a lesson in your Nonet, you deliver in style in an Acrostic format, and presented effectively.
- Well done!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Wow! I appreciate this very much. Thank you for stopping and the wonderful review.