Love draws themes.
Some opposites don't attract.83 total reviews
Comment from tommyboywood
nice commentary. one assumes that you are referring to the age old contrast - God vs. Satan, good vs. evil, etc. too much hatred in the world, to be sure. thankfully though, love still survives! i wonder about the last line, whether it should read either "that which lurks in destruction schemes hate," or that which lurks in destruction's schemes - hate." just a thought. :)
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nice commentary. one assumes that you are referring to the age old contrast - God vs. Satan, good vs. evil, etc. too much hatred in the world, to be sure. thankfully though, love still survives! i wonder about the last line, whether it should read either "that which lurks in destruction schemes hate," or that which lurks in destruction's schemes - hate." just a thought. :)
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thank you for these lovely, uplifting words and good rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from ravim
Love and Hate - a killer antonym (and as I see, you intend to kill with the scissors!)
The poem is short and sweet and rich in poetic thought. One draw its theme from Heaven and the other is left to imagination (Hell?)
We have a rhyme in Heaven's dreams and destruction's schemes.
Love this thought. Hate to lose.
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Love and Hate - a killer antonym (and as I see, you intend to kill with the scissors!)
The poem is short and sweet and rich in poetic thought. One draw its theme from Heaven and the other is left to imagination (Hell?)
We have a rhyme in Heaven's dreams and destruction's schemes.
Love this thought. Hate to lose.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thank you for these lovely, uplifting words and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from TPAC
Super Never wrote anything in this style But reading as I review works is beginning to unfold possibilities, Precise and creative in point his is good and well crafted Thank you for sharing
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Super Never wrote anything in this style But reading as I review works is beginning to unfold possibilities, Precise and creative in point his is good and well crafted Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thank you for these lovely, uplifting words and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Love
will draw its theme from Heaven's dreams
that which lurks in destruction's schemes
hate.
all these different styles are pretty new to me, Roy.
rather a clever use of words in this short piece, which ring true.
Good luck with the contest.
Margaret
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Love
will draw its theme from Heaven's dreams
that which lurks in destruction's schemes
hate.
all these different styles are pretty new to me, Roy.
rather a clever use of words in this short piece, which ring true.
Good luck with the contest.
Margaret
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thanks Margaret, I didn't know this style existed before this one, thanks for the the great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from skye
Love
will draw its theme from Heaven's dreams
that which lurks in destruction's schemes
hate
The antonym is powerful Hate is the antithesis of love, and is destructive, mostly to the inner self.
Excellent.
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Love
will draw its theme from Heaven's dreams
that which lurks in destruction's schemes
hate
The antonym is powerful Hate is the antithesis of love, and is destructive, mostly to the inner self.
Excellent.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thanks Skye, for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Autumn Splendour
What an intriguing Antonym Poem. I'm learning this for the first time.
Yes, we experience God's love if we abide in Him "draw its theme from Heaven's dream" On the other hand we experience hate if we engage in unwholesome acts "destruction schemes".
Well said and good luck to your contest.
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What an intriguing Antonym Poem. I'm learning this for the first time.
Yes, we experience God's love if we abide in Him "draw its theme from Heaven's dream" On the other hand we experience hate if we engage in unwholesome acts "destruction schemes".
Well said and good luck to your contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thanks, for this great review and comments, and the well wishes, blessings, Roy.
Comment from TKField
Yes, love and hate are essentially the same thing. Two sides of the same coin, but both passionate emotions. I really didn't get this poem. Heaven's dreams? Seems like a cheap way to rhyme the eeem sound you got going. I guess...Love good, hate bad, sums it up, but still a bit underwhelming.
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Yes, love and hate are essentially the same thing. Two sides of the same coin, but both passionate emotions. I really didn't get this poem. Heaven's dreams? Seems like a cheap way to rhyme the eeem sound you got going. I guess...Love good, hate bad, sums it up, but still a bit underwhelming.
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Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thanks, you don't have to take a 'cheap' swipe. Roy.
Comment from jmdg1954
Awesome... I like how the poem itself resembles a pair of scissors.
The second line reflects "love" and the third line leads the reader into "hate".
Nicely done. The lines are well written depicting each feeling.
John
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Awesome... I like how the poem itself resembles a pair of scissors.
The second line reflects "love" and the third line leads the reader into "hate".
Nicely done. The lines are well written depicting each feeling.
John
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thanks for the outstanding review and wonderful comments and stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from livelylinda
Roy: I had never heard of this kind of poem but you have written it well and your point is noted. Good luck in this contest. Should be very interesting entries. livelylinda
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Roy: I had never heard of this kind of poem but you have written it well and your point is noted. Good luck in this contest. Should be very interesting entries. livelylinda
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thanks Linda, for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from dragonpoet
These few words describe love and hate. The first two love and the last two hate.
I think the the artwork shows what happens to the heart when it hates or is hated.
It is cut or broken.
I hope you did well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
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These few words describe love and hate. The first two love and the last two hate.
I think the the artwork shows what happens to the heart when it hates or is hated.
It is cut or broken.
I hope you did well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 09-May-2015
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Thanks, Joan, for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
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Any time, Roy,
Joan