This one's mine...
More than a contest?11 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
There are so many different ways each site counts words, I don't know how you guys keep up. This was a fun one and not as scary as I expected. It is still well written and a great entry for this contest. I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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There are so many different ways each site counts words, I don't know how you guys keep up. This was a fun one and not as scary as I expected. It is still well written and a great entry for this contest. I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for the review. Yep, its hard keeping track of it sometimes. lol. Much appreciated
Comment from amahra
LOL I hope dean got a good laugh out of this one, cause I sure did. Nicely written. Good luck. I shall vote in this one.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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LOL I hope dean got a good laugh out of this one, cause I sure did. Nicely written. Good luck. I shall vote in this one.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for the review. I believe he did. lol. Much appreciated
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi...
I love this! Poor Dean. You did a perfect job on this story for the prompt.
Great entry. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Hi...
I love this! Poor Dean. You did a perfect job on this story for the prompt.
Great entry. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Many thanks Jax. Told with admiration and affection for his work. Much appreciated.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a hoot!!! There's not much more to say about it except well written and interesting. Last line is priceless. Maybe this one will--"be mine."
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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This is a hoot!!! There's not much more to say about it except well written and interesting. Last line is priceless. Maybe this one will--"be mine."
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for your response to this piece. Much appreciated
Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, dear, at first I thought you were competing with Dean Kutch, but the ending surprised me. I can't honestly say I get this one, but it is written well. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Oh, dear, at first I thought you were competing with Dean Kutch, but the ending surprised me. I can't honestly say I get this one, but it is written well. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Yep. You got it. Trying to take him out by nefarious means but alas he already posted his work. Thanks for review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Cajungirl
Hee,hee,hee, this is soo funny. I love it! Poor old Dean, but at least he got his story out. Great original entry. This should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Hee,hee,hee, this is soo funny. I love it! Poor old Dean, but at least he got his story out. Great original entry. This should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for your response to this one. Much appreciated.
Comment from Spitfire
What a skilled writer you are. Every words count toward the creation of a story line to freak the reader out. The humorous ending plus the tight writing -- well, I'll check out the others, but thinking this one gets my vote.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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What a skilled writer you are. Every words count toward the creation of a story line to freak the reader out. The humorous ending plus the tight writing -- well, I'll check out the others, but thinking this one gets my vote.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for the great review of this piece. I enjoyed writing it. I am basking in the complements. Lol
Much appreciated
Comment from mfowler
Poor, Dean. The mocking shocking that poor poet gets on FS is amazing. You've done it again here, and with style. I love the concept you've developed, but the ending is my favourite part. Of course, he'd bee pleased to have posted before the shocking events of the night.
A fun, exciting and original entry.
Best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Poor, Dean. The mocking shocking that poor poet gets on FS is amazing. You've done it again here, and with style. I love the concept you've developed, but the ending is my favourite part. Of course, he'd bee pleased to have posted before the shocking events of the night.
A fun, exciting and original entry.
Best of luck.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for this great review. This is done with great affection for the man. I am proud to call him my friend. Very generous and a real talent but I am sure many would like to, on occasion, remove him from the contest. lol
Much appreciated
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It is a good tactic. Helps your winning ratio. I came second to him recently, but he still creamed me.
Comment from Bill Schott
Looks like the ironic ending is the real horror. Is Dean Kuch really this intimidating? I like the story, although anyone outside of Fanstory, or who were looking for actual horror, would be puzzled at this post.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Looks like the ironic ending is the real horror. Is Dean Kuch really this intimidating? I like the story, although anyone outside of Fanstory, or who were looking for actual horror, would be puzzled at this post.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Nah, he isn't. It is more a dig at those who think he can't be touched 'Master of Horror' and all that. I love his stuff and am proud to call him my friend. You may be right but I think the theme stands up on its own without being on Fanstory. This one was just a bit of inside fun and has been adapted from a longer piece written for somewhere else.
Thank you for the honest review. Much appreciated
Comment from Dean Kuch
Heh-heh, yeah, and it hurt like hell, too, LOL.
Ya' know, you're probably right, this one will be yours, more than likely. The only minor flaw in your chilling tale of metaphysical espionage is this; my wife wouldn't bother to administer first aid. She'd simply let me die, hee-hee...
Best of luck to you in the contest. ;) ~Dean
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Heh-heh, yeah, and it hurt like hell, too, LOL.
Ya' know, you're probably right, this one will be yours, more than likely. The only minor flaw in your chilling tale of metaphysical espionage is this; my wife wouldn't bother to administer first aid. She'd simply let me die, hee-hee...
Best of luck to you in the contest. ;) ~Dean
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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I thought that might be the case but I couldn't see Gidget managing it either. Many thanks. Much appreciated.
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At least Gidget means well and has my best interests at heart, lol...
Good luck, great story with lots of action-packed imagery for just 100 words. :)