The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 88 "Don't stop me now"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
19 total reviews
Comment from kentuckywoman53
Very cute picture and poem. Your words depict a situation that happens to many of us and you presented it with good rhyming. This made me smile and giggle and brought fun into my otherwise dull day. Great job!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015
Very cute picture and poem. Your words depict a situation that happens to many of us and you presented it with good rhyming. This made me smile and giggle and brought fun into my otherwise dull day. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015
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Glad to make you laugh, Sorry I am so far behind... will catch up today hopefully... Back from Florida, had a sweet visit and told my sisters about the other one in Oregon... Love you dear lady, Carolyn
Comment from misscookie
I'm sure I do but with my short term memory after my stroke I can't remember.
So things like that don't get to me much.
I love the words to your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
I'm sure I do but with my short term memory after my stroke I can't remember.
So things like that don't get to me much.
I love the words to your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
Thank you so much Cookie, it was fun to write. :-) Carolyn
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You're very welcome. Until; next time.
Cookie
Comment from jmdg1954
I'm always thinking silly... One needs something to keep ones sanity in this fast paced society. Although, I am trying to scale back on the craziness. Leave that for the young.
Nicely, cookily, laughingly, humorously, composed-ily. John
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
I'm always thinking silly... One needs something to keep ones sanity in this fast paced society. Although, I am trying to scale back on the craziness. Leave that for the young.
Nicely, cookily, laughingly, humorously, composed-ily. John
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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I always love your fun- il- il-ly ..comments. Thanks John, :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn; I enjoyed is really amusing and quite lighthearted piece of poetry wear your rhyming and meter were done very well. Your rhyming was especially impressive for each word used in your rhyming was contingent to the meaning and concept of the lines and the verse. Your rhythmic tempo, meter, cadence and timing all were very helpful in making the reading of your poem clear, fluid and easy. Thank you for sharing and posting and I hope your muse doesn't take over too much.
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
Carolyn; I enjoyed is really amusing and quite lighthearted piece of poetry wear your rhyming and meter were done very well. Your rhyming was especially impressive for each word used in your rhyming was contingent to the meaning and concept of the lines and the verse. Your rhythmic tempo, meter, cadence and timing all were very helpful in making the reading of your poem clear, fluid and easy. Thank you for sharing and posting and I hope your muse doesn't take over too much.
Alex
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Thanks Alex
So glad you got a chuckle out of this little poem.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
I marvel how well some of the poets on here have the talent for end rhyme that "rolls" off the tongue. To me, this is a masterpiece even if silly.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
I marvel how well some of the poets on here have the talent for end rhyme that "rolls" off the tongue. To me, this is a masterpiece even if silly.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Thanks Shari,
I always value your comments. So glad you enjoyed this silly little thing.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
I had to laugh at your explanation, but it is good exercise for the brain. I've been working on a silly poem, too and have changed it a couple of times. May have it ready soon. So don't stop now! LOL Miss Sally
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
I had to laugh at your explanation, but it is good exercise for the brain. I've been working on a silly poem, too and have changed it a couple of times. May have it ready soon. So don't stop now! LOL Miss Sally
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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LOL Thanks Miss Sally,,, keep writing... sometimes we need to read light things. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
HI Carolyn, you just have to love that muse...LOL...mine seems to be a vacation most of the time...LOL...I love your poem...very nicely written...and what a sweet picture...well done...you and your muse...LOL...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
HI Carolyn, you just have to love that muse...LOL...mine seems to be a vacation most of the time...LOL...I love your poem...very nicely written...and what a sweet picture...well done...you and your muse...LOL...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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LOL .. So glad you enjoyed this one. Sometimes we just have to have a light poetic moment.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
LOL Carolyn this made me laugh...and the picture was perfect for the humor silliness of it. Brain exercises....so that is what I am doing wrong.LOL
Thanks for the fun and light post I enjoyed it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
LOL Carolyn this made me laugh...and the picture was perfect for the humor silliness of it. Brain exercises....so that is what I am doing wrong.LOL
Thanks for the fun and light post I enjoyed it.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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So glad you got a laugh out of this one. We do need to lighten up now and then. As a matter of fact, I have missed your crazy squirrels. LOL..
Yep, gotta exercise that brain..
Love you, Carolyn
Comment from Curly Girly
Oh, well, it is good to be silly now and then. I loved your cute image choice. I think writing exercises like this are invaluable ones.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
Oh, well, it is good to be silly now and then. I loved your cute image choice. I think writing exercises like this are invaluable ones.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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They wake me up...
Thanks for the fun review.
;-) Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. Yes, I have felt like this from time to time. There are times when you can do nothing wrong and then there are times when you can do nothing right. 😊
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. Yes, I have felt like this from time to time. There are times when you can do nothing wrong and then there are times when you can do nothing right. 😊
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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And then there are times when you can do nothing.... LOL
thanks Tom for your comments.
:-) Carolyn
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Take care