Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

rely/trust/deny/obey - strong verbs used in your imperative statements
take his advise - you mean advice
a thoughtful poem of faith with wise observations and advice
Brooke

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

Thanks Brooke for this fine review. yes, I mean advice.

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

I fixed it, I always appreciate your throughness., :-) Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn; a very inspirational, prolific and enlightening piece of poetry that I not only enjoyed reading but was inspired by it. Your message came clearly across when you especially wrote: "Deny self and follow Him,it's joy in the making/Always tell others about His love/yes, is the answer when He asked, "would you be My child?"". A very effective message. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always Carolyn.
Alex

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

Thank you Alex for this fine review. I am glad you liked the ending to the poem.
"-) Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Beautifully written poem, Carolyn. I give thanks and pray throughout the day for I think it is how I survive, especially as of late. Thanks for the wonderful read.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Dear V.
I do so hope you are doing better. Thank you for your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Perfect vessel to spread the word of our wonderful God! I love the artwork above, it shows how much appreciation the world has to offer. Yes I prayed today, several times! I love the talks we have .
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Thanks Steve for your wonderful comments. Have a great day.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from lynglyng

Excellent

This poem was excellently written with truth and meaning. I was blessed by your words that spoke of putting God first and of His goodness. Thank you for sharing this poem and being a blessing.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

I appreciate you very much. You are always such an encouragement to me. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of work. I am afraid Tha I haven't prayed for a long time. I must get back to doing just that. My girlfriend and I used to go to the church, but we haven't been for a while. We must go again soon. Thank you.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thank you Tom, I am happy this made you think about prayer. :-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 08-Jan-2015

Me too.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Carolyn, I pray every night...for everyone....this is such a beautiful poem of faith...so very well written...and a stunning picture ...love it...Luff Linda xxoo Love

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks Linda,
Once we get started prayer is an easy thing. We certainly would never run out of things to be thankful for.
Love, Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 07-Jan-2015

you are always so welcome you...no we wouldn't...Linda xxoo

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, sometimes when Christians write they use trite phrases, however sincere. I liked the fresh way you stated the directive to pray. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks GracieAnn,
I am sort of a 'tell it like it is' Christian. It would seem to me that when the Lord says
'give us this day our daily bread,' He is encouraging daily prayer.
I appreciate your fine review.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from CHIGYSISKI

Excellent

Lovely acrostic poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and this is definitely a nice poem to start the year with. These were my favorite lines:
Always tell others about His love
Yes, is the answer when He ask, "Will you be my child?"

Great job!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

No I didn't pray to any god this day as I don't believe in a supreme being. But be that as it may, this was a well written verse that gets to its point in a good poetic vogue. It is well written and voiced poetically... john

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thank you John for your candid comments about the poem. I appreciate the read and review. :-) Carolyn