The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 99 "He holds"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
24 total reviews
Comment from kentuckywoman53
A fantastic writing containing words that convey your thoughts in a smooth excellence. The picture you chose compliments your wonderful posting. Well done once again!!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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A fantastic writing containing words that convey your thoughts in a smooth excellence. The picture you chose compliments your wonderful posting. Well done once again!!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Thank you sweet lady,
I'm happy you enjoyed this one.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
What a lovely poem about your family or friends who have gone on to be with the Lord. It speaks greatly of your love for our Father in Heaven. God bless you, Carolyn. Miss Sally :>D
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What a lovely poem about your family or friends who have gone on to be with the Lord. It speaks greatly of your love for our Father in Heaven. God bless you, Carolyn. Miss Sally :>D
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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He is awesome..... thank you so much for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful and sentimental poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This is a very nice way to look at the ones we have lost. Safe in the arms if the Lord.
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This is a beautiful and sentimental poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This is a very nice way to look at the ones we have lost. Safe in the arms if the Lord.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Tom, you always overwhelm me with honors, encouragement and wonderful comments. Thank you so much my friend. :-) Carolyn
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Take care.
Comment from misscookie
Not only do I love the artwork you choose the out orange made it look alive.
You capture my attention from the star.
You and I are on the same page for I do the same things some how it makes things right.
Have a blessed Sunday.
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Not only do I love the artwork you choose the out orange made it look alive.
You capture my attention from the star.
You and I are on the same page for I do the same things some how it makes things right.
Have a blessed Sunday.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Hi there dear lady,
I did have a wonderful Sunday. Thank you for liking and relating to this poem.
Love, Carolyn
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You are very welcome.
Take care until next time.
Cookie
Comment from adewpearl
good use of proximate rhyming with soul/holds in your abcb quatrain poem
good alliteration and assonance in deep despair
a most thoughtful poem of faith that expresses the speaker's belief in reunion with one's loved ones in the afterlife
Brooke
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good use of proximate rhyming with soul/holds in your abcb quatrain poem
good alliteration and assonance in deep despair
a most thoughtful poem of faith that expresses the speaker's belief in reunion with one's loved ones in the afterlife
Brooke
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks Brooke for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from MelB
Beautiful sky in the picture! When the world seems lost and in despair, a great place to turn, to the Father in heaven. Peace can come knowing that one day we will be reunited with those we love and have lost.
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Beautiful sky in the picture! When the world seems lost and in despair, a great place to turn, to the Father in heaven. Peace can come knowing that one day we will be reunited with those we love and have lost.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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What a wonderful summary of the poem, Thank you MelB.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from vfbryant
I love your poem, and I feel the same. my mom died this past March, and a very dear friend died suddenly a few yrs.before. Every once and awhile, I think about the comfort it gives me to know where they are, and that, because of Jesus, I know I will be with them, and with Him someday. The last line of your poem is my favorite. Valerie
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I love your poem, and I feel the same. my mom died this past March, and a very dear friend died suddenly a few yrs.before. Every once and awhile, I think about the comfort it gives me to know where they are, and that, because of Jesus, I know I will be with them, and with Him someday. The last line of your poem is my favorite. Valerie
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you Valerie for your wonderful and insightful comments. I'm so happy you got so much from 'He holds.'
:-) Carolyn
Comment from JudyS
notesandmore, Lovely poem and very heartfelt. You chose the perfect picture to go along with it as well. Excellent writing. Judy
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notesandmore, Lovely poem and very heartfelt. You chose the perfect picture to go along with it as well. Excellent writing. Judy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you Judy for this fine review of 'He holds.'
:-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
OH Carolyn...this is so beautiful...love your words...and when your time...and mine come...we will see them all again...I love this...and a beautiful picture...luff Linda xxoo
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OH Carolyn...this is so beautiful...love your words...and when your time...and mine come...we will see them all again...I love this...and a beautiful picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thank you dear for this wonderful review, there are a lot of reasons to want to go to Heaven, :-) Love you, Carolyn
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yes there are...you are so welcome Carolyn...sooooooooo love ya...Linda xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, and He sure holds a lot of them,too, Carolyn, at least in my case. But, we can all rest assured that those of us who are saved and washed in the blood of Christ can one day be reunited with them again one day.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Yeah, and He sure holds a lot of them,too, Carolyn, at least in my case. But, we can all rest assured that those of us who are saved and washed in the blood of Christ can one day be reunited with them again one day.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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And what a reunion that will be.... Thank you Dean for this wonderful review.
:-) Carolyn
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It was my pleasure.