A Nonsense Nursery Rhyme
A Bad Day For Miss Muffet3 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
This is a good take off on many nursery rhymes. Very good spoof. The presentation is well done and thye ending is really good!You did a good job with the nonsense.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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This is a good take off on many nursery rhymes. Very good spoof. The presentation is well done and thye ending is really good!You did a good job with the nonsense.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for the constructive review. All the best
Comment from Jackarrie
Little Miss Muffet sat on a tuffet
Got bored and said "well stuff it"
After a while, the spider arrived
Miss Muffet was gone, he felt deprived
this is a brilliant opening stanza to your well written poem I enjoyed reading it and had to laugh, I am sure you had fun writing it.
good luck in the contest Mary
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Little Miss Muffet sat on a tuffet
Got bored and said "well stuff it"
After a while, the spider arrived
Miss Muffet was gone, he felt deprived
this is a brilliant opening stanza to your well written poem I enjoyed reading it and had to laugh, I am sure you had fun writing it.
good luck in the contest Mary
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you very much for the review. glad you liked it. It was fun to write!
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahahaha! Great job. I found it very amusing and I think she was lucky little boy blue didn't come along as well. I think this is a great contest entry and all the best with it. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Hahahahahaha! Great job. I found it very amusing and I think she was lucky little boy blue didn't come along as well. I think this is a great contest entry and all the best with it. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you very much for this. much appreciated