Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writr, you did an excellent job writing this senryu of truth and perspective. there are already laws put into place behind closed doors that will try to stop what preachers are saying. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014

You are so right. My husband is a preacher. He was asked what he would do if he were ask to present his sermons for scrutiny, he said I would hand them the Bible and say, "here they are, everyone of them." Thank you so very much sweetwoodjax for your comments.

Comment from butterfly4265

Excellent

A good message contained in a just a few well chosen words. I especially liked how the flag is also reflected on the window, doubling the "reflections" on how something can be so easily lost. Very clever. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014

And thank you for this awesome review.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Great message in your senryu poem. It is written with the correct syllable and line count. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014

Thanks Teresa for reading and your comments.

Comment from DSMalott

Excellent

Your message comes through loud and clear.
The syllable count is solid and the patriotic theme stands firm in these limited but well set words and lines.
Thanks.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014

Thank you so very much for this review and understanding of the message. :-)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is an important statement about our cherished freedoms and an apt warning to be careful not to let them slip away. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014

Thank you Jeanie for this insightful review. :-)