Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

I love the unique presentation of this 1-6-1 poem, and the very effective use of just 8 syllables to present the message. Fun and a bit creepy! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014

Comment from stroncoso1

Excellent

Well done my friend. You followed the 1-6-1 syllabic count respectively and came up with a gem of a poem that is meaningful. Good luck in the contest. You entry is clever.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

Thanks so much, stroncosco1. I truly appreciate your encouragement, and kind review. :}

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

love the way you added the words and the picture together. Five stars from me on this piece of art. Thank you for posting and God Bless.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

Thanks very much for the encouraging review and kind comments, Neonewman. I appreciate it most sincerely. :}