Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

drink
too much, over the brink
stink
Excellent syllable count for the prompt 1-6-1
love the choice of topic and the presentation
good luck in te contest

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014

Thank you for the review and the support. I appreciate both.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

You have stated this nicely. The point you make is so true. The picture you chose expresses the theme of your poem very well. Great job!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

Thank you very much. I appreciate your support.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 1 6 1 poem about the scent of too much alcohol. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

Thank you very much. I appreciate the review and your time.

Comment from JudyS

Excellent

Very good and witty poem. You said a lot in so few words. I enjoyed the read. Good contest entry. I wish you the best of luck with it. Have a wonderful day. Judy

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

Thank you. I appreciate your kind words and great review.