Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Author notes: Me too!

This is a gorgeous little piece, Debra. So much romance in so few words.

Looks like we've both been blessed with the same kind of man - they are special aren't they??

I really hope this wins.

Hugs and love,

Sonali

p.s. Katie's back on my list, dear. :)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Hi Sonali :) thank you for your lovely feedback. So glad you bagged yourself a romantic man too! My entry didn't do well in the booth but not to worry, it's fun taking part :) thank you for keeping Katie on your list! Love Debra x

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

nothing is more romantic than dancing with someone who loves you...you can feel every step...every motion...sigh...very nicely written...and I love the picture...

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank you linda for your lovely feedback :) Kindest regards as always, Debra

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This old picture brings back memories when teens made the best of opportunity that was far more restricted. The poem feels like a women's memory, held in her girl's heart.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank you sea glass for your great feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Nice, a very well thought out 3/5/3. I liked the vintage photo, and you're right, dancing can be very romantic anywhere, and t anytime.

Great job with this one, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thanks Dean for your great feedback and good luck wishes... :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 31-Aug-2014

You're welcome. :}

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

Wonderfully written poem that you wrote for this prompt. I really enjoyed reading it. I like the feeling of love from your poem. The syllable count is on. Great picture. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thankyou rrabinow for your great feedback and good luck wishes... :)

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

he danced me
around the kitchen--
romanced me

a nice love poem, in few words, a very good entry into the contest.
Best of luck
Mary

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you Mary for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from skye

Excellent

he danced me
around the kitchen--
romanced me

I love the times when we danced in the kitchen. Such a rush, and such a sweet time together.
Love the art.
Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you skye for your great feedback. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

lovely pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count
I like the rhyming of danced me/romanced me
you create a delightful visual with a sweet tone
Brooke

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you Brooke for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is an interesting and appealing little vignette in 3-5-3 form. I'm left wondering about the rest of the story. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you Jeanie for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from bhogg

Excellent

A nice 3-5-3 that for me has good imagery. Accompanied by appropriate art-work. All in all, an enjoyable read. I often use the metaphor of dance and love. It's a good one. Bill

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you Bill for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...