One of these nights. ( 169 words)
The road to sleep is paved with best intentions.57 total reviews
Comment from Tonulak
Hi Dallas Alice,
Yep, I know that feeling, though I haven't been on too much. But, it's all the other things; news, late night movies andMozart (I'll bet you thought I'd say Miles Davis...yeah, some nights). Great entry for this contest--Ted
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Hi Dallas Alice,
Yep, I know that feeling, though I haven't been on too much. But, it's all the other things; news, late night movies andMozart (I'll bet you thought I'd say Miles Davis...yeah, some nights). Great entry for this contest--Ted
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Yeah, Ted. That would have been my first guess. But then I shouldn't be surprised, your are an eclectic sort. Just spent all evening watching Breaking Bad binge. Might as well add something new. 1:15 think I will turn in up at 6:15. Have a good one.
Comment from Lulube
What not marking down your reviewing ranks at 6am and then again in the afternoon? I need to get out of the competition end of ranking for reviewers and poets. and just casually post when I feel like it instead of feeling like I'm behind and why do I never seem to get anywhere. Loved your imagery.
good write
lulube
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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What not marking down your reviewing ranks at 6am and then again in the afternoon? I need to get out of the competition end of ranking for reviewers and poets. and just casually post when I feel like it instead of feeling like I'm behind and why do I never seem to get anywhere. Loved your imagery.
good write
lulube
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks for reviewing. Good luck on your addiction of choice...lol
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lol and they come in all shapes and sizes.
lulube
Comment from AAud
Yeah, you struck a nerve, my friend! I have those same feelings. You did a wonderful job expressing that pull to the computer and FanStory! LOL
And the picture is a perfect representation of your theme.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Yeah, you struck a nerve, my friend! I have those same feelings. You did a wonderful job expressing that pull to the computer and FanStory! LOL
And the picture is a perfect representation of your theme.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. It would be nice to lunge in the evening just like the dog is doing. But the computer keeps calling. Fanstory is calling. The contests are calling. Even when I am sick, I worry about what is going on with the site. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I love the picture. It would be nice to lunge in the evening just like the dog is doing. But the computer keeps calling. Fanstory is calling. The contests are calling. Even when I am sick, I worry about what is going on with the site. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks for a great review.
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
DEFINITELY A MASTERPIECE AND A FEELING ONE CAN EASILY RELATE TO. I KNOW THIS MAGNETIC FIELD YOU WRITE ABOUT AND THE NOT OFTEN KEPT PROMISE THAT I WILL ATTEND TO THEIR THINGS TODAY AND TAKE A LITTLE BREAK FROM FAN STORY.IT DOES GET A LITTLE ADDICTIVE METHINKS (HELP!). WE MAY ALL BE NEEDING REHAB SOON OR A DETOX OR SOMETHING. A TEMPORARY GLOBAL INTERNET CRASH MAY DO IT.WELL DONE!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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DEFINITELY A MASTERPIECE AND A FEELING ONE CAN EASILY RELATE TO. I KNOW THIS MAGNETIC FIELD YOU WRITE ABOUT AND THE NOT OFTEN KEPT PROMISE THAT I WILL ATTEND TO THEIR THINGS TODAY AND TAKE A LITTLE BREAK FROM FAN STORY.IT DOES GET A LITTLE ADDICTIVE METHINKS (HELP!). WE MAY ALL BE NEEDING REHAB SOON OR A DETOX OR SOMETHING. A TEMPORARY GLOBAL INTERNET CRASH MAY DO IT.WELL DONE!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Can't believe how many could relate to this. Nice to know I'm not the only one. Need a group intervention.
Comment from Tsukuyomi969
I had to laugh lol, only because I'm so like that. That little section at the end with the time is what happens to me every night, with various other activities. Good work, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I had to laugh lol, only because I'm so like that. That little section at the end with the time is what happens to me every night, with various other activities. Good work, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thanks. there are tons of us out there.
Comment from IndianaIrish
Loved the humor ... And the truth in your contest entry, DALLAS. We all can relate to your story, and your incorporation of the Eagles song title was great. I do suggest to go back into the edit mode and press the rerun key several times after the last word. I almost missed the great last line with it right above the contest announcement. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Indy : )
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Loved the humor ... And the truth in your contest entry, DALLAS. We all can relate to your story, and your incorporation of the Eagles song title was great. I do suggest to go back into the edit mode and press the rerun key several times after the last word. I almost missed the great last line with it right above the contest announcement. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Indy : )
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the tip. Did so. Group intervention n the horizon. lol
Comment from scd41
Your fiction was really humorous. To get good sleep, people try so many things like giving up caffein and CNN. But it would perhaps not be wise to cut out Fanstory as its prompts actually induce sleep for me. If it is a haiku, before I find the right syllables, sleep overtakes me. All the best!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Your fiction was really humorous. To get good sleep, people try so many things like giving up caffein and CNN. But it would perhaps not be wise to cut out Fanstory as its prompts actually induce sleep for me. If it is a haiku, before I find the right syllables, sleep overtakes me. All the best!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Ha ha. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is so funny. You wrote my life as of the last month or two. Fanstory is addictive but it makes me write. I think that is why we have all joined. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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This is so funny. You wrote my life as of the last month or two. Fanstory is addictive but it makes me write. I think that is why we have all joined. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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That it does. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Pyrrho
You put together a reasonable response to the prompt. I have to admit, I find writing about writing incestuous and it is compounded by writing about Fan Story. But I will swallow my opinion on the content and assess the prose as excellent
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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You put together a reasonable response to the prompt. I have to admit, I find writing about writing incestuous and it is compounded by writing about Fan Story. But I will swallow my opinion on the content and assess the prose as excellent
Comment Written 23-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the review based on that criteria.