Many Coats of Skin
Horror Poem contest entry37 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
Wow! This is really scary. Parents beware! I liked its rhyme and rhythm. I liked the description of the monster hiding and listening to the bedtime stories and songs. It's very well written.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Wow! This is really scary. Parents beware! I liked its rhyme and rhythm. I liked the description of the monster hiding and listening to the bedtime stories and songs. It's very well written.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the huge sixer, Judy. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm humbled. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Thank you again.
Comment from NurseBarb
Very well written with no need for gore as it scary enough and can stand on its own. Great rhyming and flow as well. Last stanza is eerie which makes this poem so good.
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Very well written with no need for gore as it scary enough and can stand on its own. Great rhyming and flow as well. Last stanza is eerie which makes this poem so good.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Barb. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, wow, this is nice and spooky. I like that you wrote it from the monsters point of view. Please don't ever read this to young children, lol. Very well written. Hugs, Lou
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Oh, wow, this is nice and spooky. I like that you wrote it from the monsters point of view. Please don't ever read this to young children, lol. Very well written. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the great review, Louise. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.
Comment from Sonaleeka
very true wordings along with feelings.Very hard to capture feeling so awesomely.But i can say you did very nicely.
God bless!
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very true wordings along with feelings.Very hard to capture feeling so awesomely.But i can say you did very nicely.
God bless!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Sonaleeka. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from royowen
What a terrible horror story in a poem, well it must be true, all the stories I was told as a little boy, fortunately for me it never happened to me! Well written articulate and cleverly composed, I loved it, what a nasty little, piece, well done, good luck. Blessings, Roy.
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What a terrible horror story in a poem, well it must be true, all the stories I was told as a little boy, fortunately for me it never happened to me! Well written articulate and cleverly composed, I loved it, what a nasty little, piece, well done, good luck. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review, Roy. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece.
Comment from DALLAS01
This was eerie but definitely clever. There is nothing more frightening than anticipating a child being abducted, even if by the boogey man, or maybe I should say, especially. good luck in the contest.
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This was eerie but definitely clever. There is nothing more frightening than anticipating a child being abducted, even if by the boogey man, or maybe I should say, especially. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review, Dallas. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.
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You're welcome.
Comment from A Matter Of Words
I held my breath throughout this poem. Very well written. The rhyming scheme added to the telling of this awful tale. This is a worthy contender for this contest. Best of Luck.
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I held my breath throughout this poem. Very well written. The rhyming scheme added to the telling of this awful tale. This is a worthy contender for this contest. Best of Luck.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Matter. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece.
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You had a galloping lead in this contest. I assume you won ... congratulations. And you are most welcome.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the poem. I love the eye. The boogie man does exist. You should have looked better when you searched the closet and under the bed. The boogie man was there, waiting until you were gone. He then steals your children and skins them. Great work. You make everyone afraid. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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I love the poem. I love the eye. The boogie man does exist. You should have looked better when you searched the closet and under the bed. The boogie man was there, waiting until you were gone. He then steals your children and skins them. Great work. You make everyone afraid. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Nellie. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece.
Comment from granny goes viral
I generally would not read this kind of poem. Did for the contest voting. Passed the others rather quickly. Yuk...this one however held my attention as it is very well written and didn't make me want to barf. Good for you.
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I generally would not read this kind of poem. Did for the contest voting. Passed the others rather quickly. Yuk...this one however held my attention as it is very well written and didn't make me want to barf. Good for you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the great review, granny. I'm glad it didn't want to make you barf, lol.
Comment from prefabmouse
Man, what an awesome scary poem. It flowed well and told a very terrifying tale of a really evil man.
It makes me want to search every inch of my children's rooms and the whole house before I go to bed.
I can't help but vote for this one. It deserves recognition and first prize.
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Man, what an awesome scary poem. It flowed well and told a very terrifying tale of a really evil man.
It makes me want to search every inch of my children's rooms and the whole house before I go to bed.
I can't help but vote for this one. It deserves recognition and first prize.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the huge sixer, prefab. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and support. I'm humbled. I'm glad you liked this twisted piece. Thank you again.